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Poetry/Vere/Wounded Sigh
Copyright Protected, ID 04-1633-581-02
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France

Written, April 02, 2024
For the International Contest This or That, Vol. 24
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Judged 04/08/2024

Second Place

"Senryu introduction with Verse."

22 Ancient Healing Symbols to Accelerate Your Healing Journey

like a butterfly with my pretty wings wounded ~ I try to flutter When my soul is bruised and beaten down, and my heart injured, scarred and bleeding: I fold what's left of my broken wings with a sigh, as feelings of emptiness overwhelm my life; for I need to heal within and be reborn beautiful. I need to find the healing power of green, in nature's harmony of new growth and rebirth: enthralled with the trees swaying in the wind, and wildflowers in hues of healing lavender; I am soothed with the balm of serene grace. And then, though still wounded my wings open, and with a quiet sigh I gasp with great happiness: there is still a hurt, ache, and grief but also joy, so I throw off betrayal, tears, and fear- and I soar; for this was a spiritual journey to find the true me.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/8/2024 6:36:00 PM

Absolutely beautiful and moving write, Constance. That opening senryu is incredible! Heartiest congratulations on your podium win in my contest. Bravo!

Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2024 2:06:00 PM

Edward, thank you for the contest and my placement, and for the compliment and congratulations, I thought the senryu intro would be nice, hugs

Valsa George

Date: 4/7/2024 8:59:00 PM

Though wounded in life, you feel you are not defeated. There is grace in you to drown all your pain and despair. Though your wigs are broken, with grace and consistent efforts you are able to spread your wings and soar high. Darkness accentuates light! A beautiful poem.

Constance La France
Date: 4/10/2024 2:07:00 PM

Valsa, thank you for the lovely comment, and compliment, hugs

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 4/2/2024 5:35:00 PM

Beauty poetry Constance, comforting “When my soul is bruised and beaten down” … Beryl

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2024 1:25:00 PM

Beryl, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 4/2/2024 5:08:00 PM

Your poem is a soulful and captivating read. The first line tugged at my heart. I especially liked 'I am soothed with the balm of serene grace' and 'still wounded my wings open.' I am left breathless and the vulnerability you've expressed about your spiritual journey from grief and sorrow to a place of peace and authenticity. Fabulous contest entry. You have such wonderful skill as a poetess. Enjoy your evening, Sara

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2024 1:26:00 PM

Sara, thank you for the compliment and lovely comment, hugs

Stephan McBride

Date: 4/2/2024 5:08:00 PM

This is truly beautiful and a blessing to read my dear friend, much love and prayers for you to soar above in joy , peace and happiness: )

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2024 1:26:00 PM

Stephan, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs

Ink Empress

Date: 4/2/2024 3:54:00 PM

So touching and soulful dear Constance, this hits so strong, and i felt so many emotions as always reading your poem. Sometimes amidst all the scars and grief we carry within, we somehow find light and strength to go on! Beautifully delivered in such an evocative manner. Made me sigh! You are a warrior. Sending you light always. Fave it is

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2024 1:28:00 PM

Ink, thank you for the compliment on my poem and me, wonderful comment, and FAV, hugs

Jay Narain

Date: 4/2/2024 10:32:00 AM

Nice poem. It shows your will to rise admist adversity.

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2024 1:28:00 PM

Jay, thank you for the compliment and comment, hugs

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 4/2/2024 8:43:00 AM

Dear Constance, your poem eloquently captures the essence of resilience and inner strength amidst adversity. I love your metaphor of the wounded butterfly seeking healing in nature's embrace is profoundly moving. It speaks to the universal human experience of overcoming pain and finding renewal. Constance your poetic words inspire hope of the transformative power of self-discovery. - Blessings, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 4/3/2024 1:29:00 PM

Daniel, thank you for the amazing comment and compliment, blessings and hugs