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Wounded Aphrodite

The rocks tripped me; I trod forward, upward to my lesson. The winds choose not to make its presence felt, yet. The sun bursts gloriously into the flat, baby-blue, sky. The red brown earth held its moisture greedily. The effort shows in pulse and perspiration, a flush blooms on cheeks unused to color. The house appears abruptly, from a froth of greenery. The wind keeps its distance, as if sensing its presence was not desired. The golden sun valiantly attempts to breach the houses gloom. The guardians of house, home, and ether, leap forth. as stone griffins, stern, etched by acid rain, stand; earthly hounds dart wraithlike through clusters of cluttering tomes, and out the door to greet me.I enter. The plaster shouts syllables, displayed in a military bent. The house hungers for light, a broom,a feather duster fright. The corner china cabinet displays a human skull. Into this room walks the spirit of air, scared by storm. God’s sacred light leaps.... only in the instructors eyes; from crippled form, blue orbs full of mischief and the joy of flight, reveling.... a wounded Aphrodite smiles.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/19/2009 6:07:00 AM
Deborah,..i only put a 6 rating on this piece because,... i really loved the Masters house way much! Ebullient! Ebullient! If the Masters house, "all3" are non fictional,....i'm waiting for the book deb! *smiles* Thanx for the invite! james
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Date: 1/9/2009 8:35:00 PM
Adam Smith is the founder of capitalism as we know it today. He's an interesting character, but both he and Karl Marx are interesting. I've got my mail on, so I want to hear the rest.
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Date: 1/8/2009 4:03:00 AM
Excellent work Deborah, the use of imagery is great...Raul
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Date: 1/8/2009 12:19:00 AM
Thanks for your blog comment Debbie.If you click on 'concrete' in PS poetry forms you will see many excellent examples of this visual poetry form.One of Hamish Fulton's 'artwork'was my inspiration for this 'fulton' poetic form last Autumn so I used his surname as a tribute.The link on the blog should take you to the'concrete' poem by Hamish in NY.Thanks for your interest.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/7/2009 7:07:00 PM
Deborah what a descriptive imagination, this poem has great flow and intrigue all the way through the piece. Great use of imagery as well! I love it! Laura :)
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