Wounded

The lines in between fade away
And I’m left standing in gray.
I cannot, dare not, go back;
Yet, I cannot find my way forward.
If I give up this fight
I will surely lose you from sight.
I cannot, dare not, say good bye;
You are the one I live for.

But my blood continues to drain
Leaving my fingers red-stained.
I cannot, dare not, let go;
But my fingers are cold, numb.

Your face is what I long to see,
What I want my last memory to be.
I cannot, dare not, look away;
Even as a siren splits the night.

I see the hope in your eyes
As my heart slowly dies.
I cannot, dare not…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Agustin Avatar
February 4, 2025 at 10:07 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Have a blessed day.
Carber Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 8:02 AM
Wow! This leaves one hungering for more, yet there seems to be no more--it's quite remarkable really. Congrats on your win, J.J.
Jane Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 5:34 AM
Thank you! I do appreciate your feedback and your suspense :-)
Ricci Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Hello Just Jane. Please take a bow. This entry is very poetic and very much poetry. It is one that should be read out loud with emphasis and meaning. The reader can feel so much power. Well done
Jane Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 5:35 AM
Hi Lisa Ricci, thank you for sharing your feelings. Always great to hear others' perspectives!xx
Gondolf Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 6:05 AM
What a gripping write, Jane, congrats on your win. John
Jane Avatar
June 1, 2018 at 5:21 AM
Thanks so much!
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