Wouldn'T You

You’d think when you die
the line ends
that you can’t see no more
hear
feel
let alone walk; 
you’d think death would be quite sure of itself
wouldn’t you?
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Bangalee Avatar
January 14, 2021 at 1:07 AM
excellent poetic expression
Poteet Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 9:38 PM
Death is a character of many roles. It will be consigned to the lake of fire eventually; but meanwhile it is kept busy in physical and spiritual venues. The Bible also speaks of eternal death which is the logical opposite of everlasting life. thanks for sparking my thoughts on this subject.
Velves Avatar
January 11, 2021 at 2:31 PM
??????, love it!
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