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Wouldn'T It Be Nice If the Words We Write

Wouldn't it be nice if the words we write could be sent without electrical means or anything else that sits on a shelf like the pencils and paper we need? Imagine a place where all our thoughts race direct from our minds in thin air from one's inner being the ideas we're seeing In less than an instant, right there. To neighbors and friends and those whom we spend most of our time worth sharing, giving and taking, creating and making ideas that convey love and caring. A "Poetry Express" might lead to success of all our good wishes well sent to just the right places and only those faces who understand our deepest intent. Like riders before on the old desert floor carrying a bag full of mind-made treasures eventually received by those who believed in the power of something unmeasured. Wouldn't it be nice if the words we write could be sent without gadgets required except for the means to tap into our dreams and read every word desired? As a poet of course, I've no other choice but to wish for such unattainable ideas while hoping for the best and giving thanks for the rest and the direction in which to steer.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/29/2013 7:59:00 AM
Its called a speach
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Date: 3/26/2013 3:17:00 PM
yes, it would be nice, but i still love the process of sitting down with a pencil and my notebook and writing my thoughts down. if our words went directly from our minds to the minds of others, i know that i'd need a censor in certain cases! still, i enjoyed your poem and what you've said here...
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Terrell Martin
Date: 3/26/2013 4:07:00 PM
Thanks Ilene. I agree with you! I don't need the brain police reading my thoughts either! (It's just a poem): Cheers, Terry
Date: 3/26/2013 1:21:00 PM
- Good thoughts in your poem Terrell. - Very nice to read! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Terrell Martin
Date: 3/26/2013 4:07:00 PM
You're awesome Anne! Thanks for the compliment. Cheerios, Terry
Date: 3/26/2013 11:39:00 AM
If only. Sigh. No mind. At least now you have the luxury of becoming MIA on a whim without the "addressee" having the means of accessing your head. Exquisite writing, Mr Rhymester. :)
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Terrell Martin
Date: 3/26/2013 4:10:00 PM
Hello "Delicious": Lovely of you to drop in (again) as you usually do. No mind-reading police around here I hope! Mine brain actually has more clutter (and junk) than I care to reveal:) Cheers, Terry

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