Would You Walk With Me

Would you take a walk with me
Let's go to your favorite trail
If you don't have a favorite trail
Picture a narrow path that starts
On the bottom of a mountain
Now we shall meet at noon
We have arrived as we get out the car
The blazing sun is shining so bright
We have to look down to walk
If we looked up it would burn our eyes
And notice that there is no shadow
The light has consumed all the darkness
We start the trail and have no problems
For the sun has given light
That we can see every rock and hole not to stumble
We hear the strength of the stream and waterfalls 
And notice the deer gathering to drink
Let's head back for we have another trail
Now that we made it back 
I would like to go again at midnight
Again we get out the car and the moon 
Is glowing from the light it receives from the sun
We start the trail and clouds cover the moon
Now it's dark for we took advantage of it's light
And did not bring our own flashlight
Now we are lost not knowing
Which way we came from or which way to go
These rocks in the way keep making us stumble
Feeling around blind trying to find
The edge of the trees to stay on the trail
We hear so many scary sounds in the night
And can not see where they are coming from
Frightened they might be about to attack
The dew has caused are feet to slide around
Could we just get out we cry
Then we see a twinkling star that directs our path
And this guides us back to the entrance
On our way back to the car
we look up to a blood moon
We see the sun, moon and stars daily
But have you taken notice of the meaning
God shows us each day
He is the light to the world all darkness
Will be consumed by His light
Jesus is like the moon in this dark world we walk in
Sun gives light to the moon to make it glow
Then we have small versions of the sun 
Twinkling through out the night
Not saying to worship sun,moon,and stars
But just to take notice of them 
From noon to three when Jesus was on cross
The sun turned to darkness
While God turned His head to mourn
The blood moon to remind us of the blood
That poured out the body of Jesus
Which He willingly gave up that we might live
It is only through God each day we have a light 
And source of energy to give life to earth
Now I pray if you have the Bible verses memorized
Or have never read one before
That the word comes to life
And fills you with that living water
And flows to all around you
And you grab ahold of Jesus
And not rely on man to get you where He went
For when in God's hand none can snatch you out
Love you all
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022


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Date: 11/20/2022 7:51:00 PM
I have been with you in your long journey during night and day ! Journey during day was comfortable and pleasant as there was light. But night journey was hazardous with not enough light ! In the same way journeying with God who is light is so pleasant. We don't have to stumble. Ideas are well co ordinated, Stephan!
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Stephan McBride
Date: 11/21/2022 12:48:00 PM
Especially the part when Jesus was on the cross, from noon to 3 it was dark, this time the sun is the brightest, it is by His glory that even the sun is on so we .might walk in the daylight at least 12 hours a day in our own blindness,and then the moon receives it light from the sun to light up
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Stephan McBride
Date: 11/21/2022 4:48:00 AM
Yes, indeed this was like a vision I was given, to try to show people God is everywhere, when our eyes are open to just how big and how great this picture we walk into each day , and yes when living in the light the darkness is revealed, and the peace and joy of knowing you are on the narrow lighted path is astonishing and we just want others to feel what is available to any that seek,
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