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Would You Walk With Me

Would you take a walk with me Let's go to your favorite trail If you don't have a favorite trail Picture a narrow path that starts On the bottom of a mountain Now we shall meet at noon We have arrived as we get out the car The blazing sun is shining so bright We have to look down to walk If we looked up it would burn our eyes And notice that there is no shadow The light has consumed all the darkness We start the trail and have no problems For the sun has given light That we can see every rock and hole not to stumble We hear the strength of the stream and waterfalls And notice the deer gathering to drink Let's head back for we have another trail Now that we made it back I would like to go again at midnight Again we get out the car and the moon Is glowing from the light it receives from the sun We start the trail and clouds cover the moon Now it's dark for we took advantage of it's light And did not bring our own flashlight Now we are lost not knowing Which way we came from or which way to go These rocks in the way keep making us stumble Feeling around blind trying to find The edge of the trees to stay on the trail We hear so many scary sounds in the night And can not see where they are coming from Frightened they might be about to attack The dew has caused are feet to slide around Could we just get out we cry Then we see a twinkling star that directs our path And this guides us back to the entrance On our way back to the car we look up to a blood moon We see the sun, moon and stars daily But have you taken notice of the meaning God shows us each day He is the light to the world all darkness Will be consumed by His light Jesus is like the moon in this dark world we walk in Sun gives light to the moon to make it glow Then we have small versions of the sun Twinkling through out the night Not saying to worship sun,moon,and stars But just to take notice of them From noon to three when Jesus was on cross The sun turned to darkness While God turned His head to mourn The blood moon to remind us of the blood That poured out the body of Jesus Which He willingly gave up that we might live It is only through God each day we have a light And source of energy to give life to earth Now I pray if you have the Bible verses memorized Or have never read one before That the word comes to life And fills you with that living water And flows to all around you And you grab ahold of Jesus And not rely on man to get you where He went For when in God's hand none can snatch you out Love you all

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Date: 11/20/2022 7:51:00 PM
I have been with you in your long journey during night and day ! Journey during day was comfortable and pleasant as there was light. But night journey was hazardous with not enough light ! In the same way journeying with God who is light is so pleasant. We don't have to stumble. Ideas are well co ordinated, Stephan!
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Stephan McBride
Date: 11/21/2022 12:48:00 PM
Especially the part when Jesus was on the cross, from noon to 3 it was dark, this time the sun is the brightest, it is by His glory that even the sun is on so we .might walk in the daylight at least 12 hours a day in our own blindness,and then the moon receives it light from the sun to light up
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Stephan McBride
Date: 11/21/2022 4:48:00 AM
Yes, indeed this was like a vision I was given, to try to show people God is everywhere, when our eyes are open to just how big and how great this picture we walk into each day , and yes when living in the light the darkness is revealed, and the peace and joy of knowing you are on the narrow lighted path is astonishing and we just want others to feel what is available to any that seek,