Would You Still Love Me?

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September 2, 2023
Placed 1st: Read Me Poetry Contest by Silent One



 

 

If no longer could I inscribe, upon tapestries of rosy skies,
Dreams tinted violet, blossomed in themes amethystine,
And no longer could I weave-in the dreamscapes of life,
Failing to decode the missives of your clandestine smile;

If bluebells, red buds, white magnolias~ blooming spring,
And the tall oaks swaying with the slow dance of willows,
And the zephyrs that undulate ripples, burbling with currents,
Could no longer wow you on the banks of our giggling river;

If rustling trees, whirling leaves, dazzling chromatic glee,
Majestic aspens, sugar maple, fall’s stellar symphony,
And blushed twilight ceding to moonlit night’s euphony,
Could no longer mesmerize you in autumn’s blazing glory;

If frosty season sprinkling snowflakes on enchanted evening,
Bedecking face of prairies, enlivening decaying meadows, 
And sun’s aureate mellowed rays glinting elongated shadows,
Could no longer lure you to the splendor of falling snow;

If I can’t infer love from passions amethyst of rising dawn,
If I can’t decipher meaning of your covert, unfolding smile,
If I can’t invoke spring in budding birth of yellow daffodils,
If I can’t show you autumn in a single golden falling leaf,
If I can’t make you feel, winter’s angst in shuttering trees;

Then I am afraid, it must be true, a poet I have ceased to be;
And yet, I hear you say my dear, forever you will love me.

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Date: 12/6/2023 1:35:00 PM
All the beauty that inspires you will never run out….but if it does you have it in your mind’s eye and your heart will sing it to the page. Congrats on your showcase win. SuZ
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Date: 12/6/2023 9:11:00 AM
Once again, congrats for winning with this nice poem.
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Date: 12/6/2023 6:58:00 AM
You are most proud of a poem you wrote for my contest? You have so many poems so if that is the case, then that makes me happy.. Congratulations on having your poem showcased..
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Date: 9/15/2023 2:12:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem, Vijay! What I see, you entered a different one in the contest. Doesn't really matter, your poem is still brilliant! BW~ Mala
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Date: 9/14/2023 7:20:00 AM
Oh Vijay this is one hell of a poem and so brilliant on my theme.. its such a shame that you did not enter it, as it would have been first place.. You write romance so well and I can see you were inspired by your ink to pen such a lovely poem with so many questions of yearning.. love that ending.. we sacrifice so much for love
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Date: 9/14/2023 9:19:00 AM
So glad you took the time to read, SO. I can't believe I entered the wrong poem--after espousing on your lovely prompt, dear to my heart. Much appreciate your insights, my friend. Thank you for sponsoring contests.
Date: 9/12/2023 10:54:00 PM
Your poetry is your poetry. peoples expectations of you do not change. And the colors you mention identify you It could be what your known for.
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Date: 9/14/2023 9:15:00 AM
Thank you. Much appreciate.
Date: 9/12/2023 3:26:00 PM
I thought I left a comment but I didnt.This is so very poetic and beautiful,but if you failed as a poet,she'd still be loving you.A very sweet ending..too.
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Date: 9/14/2023 9:14:00 AM
Much appreciate, Charmaine. So glad you stopped by. Many thanks for your kind remarks.
Date: 9/12/2023 12:01:00 PM
Just wow!!!!Really beautifully written ,loved the way you ended the poem!All the best for the contest.Hope to see you win!
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Date: 9/14/2023 9:13:00 AM
Thank you Kenisha--much appreciate.
Date: 9/9/2023 6:33:00 AM
And why should she not, poetic talent such as yours touches the heart, the soul, and spirit which translates into love between you and her for evermore. Having said the above, how could such elegant, enchanting, eloquent writes cease to enrich your platinum pen, impossible, you will go down one day, still far away, in history, as more poems are to follow, and known with the likes of Wordsworth, Shakespeare , Poe and other famous poets. Kudos Vijay for a breathtaking masterpiece. BLESSINGS Jen
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Date: 9/14/2023 9:13:00 AM
So very kind of you Jennifer. Much appreciate your insights my friend. Many thanks, as always.
Date: 9/7/2023 8:59:00 AM
oh that was so NICE the way you ended it, and the imagery was stunning
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Date: 9/14/2023 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 9/7/2023 3:35:00 AM
Wonderful and wonderous. A joy to read. wishing you a win. God bless you friend. Love, Gina
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Date: 9/7/2023 4:33:00 AM
Glad to see you again, Gina. Much appreciate your thoughtful remarks. Blessings to you as well, my friend.
Date: 9/6/2023 7:27:00 PM
If I could give this gorgeous piece of art 10 stars and hearts, I would paste them on here. MY WORD!!! Outstanding work my dear friend. A fav of course. :) xx ~ Kina
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Date: 9/7/2023 4:31:00 AM
So very kind of you my dear friend. I am thrilled by your glowing feedback, Akkina. So very special to receive your FAVE, as well. Many thanks.
Date: 9/6/2023 5:17:00 PM
I am sure she would still love you but her diary would lay empty of such beautiful words, now you wouldn't want that would you ? :) excellent entry Vijay,
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Date: 9/7/2023 4:30:00 AM
Always a joy when you visit my friend. Much appreciate. Many thanks, Vienna.
Date: 9/6/2023 10:01:00 AM
Majestic poetry Veej. You covered so many poetic inspiration points. I wish I could write like this. I'm just a simple fellow
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Date: 9/7/2023 4:29:00 AM
You write way way better my friend--beaming intellect. Much appreciate Tom. Many thanks.
Date: 9/6/2023 9:25:00 AM
This is a true and great display of a higher level of poetic talent. Definitely a shining gem and a new fav for my growing list. God bless you my good friend.
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Date: 9/7/2023 4:28:00 AM
Honor my friend to read your glowing feedback, and honor to receive your FAVE. Much appreciate your valued remarks, Robert. Many thanks.
Date: 9/5/2023 8:49:00 AM
"And the tall oaks swaying with the slow dance of willows," -- beautiful, soothing, rocking imagery. "Could no longer wow you on the banks of our giggling river;" -- Love it! A fine poem throughout. I think you would be loved no matter what, would the world run out of ink, and every tree and slate spent of its ability to record. Then the sands and seas would carry your lyric heart, touching all, in their endless romantic flowing.
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Date: 9/5/2023 1:06:00 PM
That is such a beautiful feedback my friend. Your comments are quite eloquent and rewarding, Joe. Much appreciate, as always. Many thanks.
Date: 9/5/2023 7:41:00 AM
Dear Vijay, your amazing artistry is on grand display in the enrapturing emotion of this masterwork. Sumptuous imagery and rich metaphors grace your verse to deliver poetic eloquence and elegance upon the poetic page. A romantic love poem for the ages! I know Silent will adore this poem as I do. A fav! Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/5/2023 1:04:00 PM
So glad to see you again my friend. I am honored by your glowing comments and your FAVE. Always appreciate your valued feedback, Susan. Many thanks.
Date: 9/5/2023 5:55:00 AM
Gorgeous gorgeous gorgeous..
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Date: 9/5/2023 1:03:00 PM
Thank you Richard--much appreciate.
Date: 9/4/2023 10:22:00 PM
Oh yes, true love forever when they accept us as we are:) great imagery, Vijay:)
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Date: 9/5/2023 1:02:00 PM
So true and well said. Much appreciate, Jo--many thanks.
Date: 9/4/2023 7:50:00 AM
As far as I'm concerned you are one of the few poets whose majesty deserves a crown. Every word is in its place, every emotion whispers love, whilst best of all is your imagery which evokes paintings. Best for a win.
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Date: 9/5/2023 1:02:00 PM
So nice to hear that--especially from you Victor. Much appreciate your kind support. Many thanks for your visit and comments.
Date: 9/4/2023 7:14:00 AM
Good rhythm, rhyme and flow of this contest entry. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for sharing it and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 9/4/2023 7:27:00 AM
Thank you Sara--you are always so kind. Much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 9/4/2023 6:58:00 AM
Such an excellent write from a poet expressing his love... so poetic... full of great imagery. Glad to read your poems after a long time Vijayji... Best wishes in the contest. God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/4/2023 7:26:00 AM
Glad to see you again Ani, after a long time. Glad you are back on Soup writing beautiful poetry as always. Much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 9/4/2023 3:08:00 AM
Never cease be, dear Vijay! An ardent reader will ever adore reading between your rhymes, diving into your oceanic poetry, strolling in your enchanting natural imagery! So what about a lover! So glorious what you have composed and painted! The best of luck for a well deserved recognition and outshining placement! God bless you and best regards.
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Date: 9/4/2023 7:25:00 AM
Glad to see you after a very long time my friend. Your comments are always cheerful and rewarding, Besma. Much appreciate. Many thanks
Date: 9/3/2023 11:05:00 AM
Amazing piece, Dear Vijay! Images in your poems are always breathtaking, and you have created these verses with exquisite ingenuity! Loved every line, every stanza - truly a magnificent piece!
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Date: 9/3/2023 4:00:00 PM
Thank you Mala. Always a joy when you visit. Much appreciate your glowing remarks..
Date: 9/3/2023 5:37:00 AM
Amazing prompt and amazing take on the prompt
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Date: 9/3/2023 3:59:00 PM
Many thanks aura--much appreciate. Welcome to Soup.
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