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Would You Still Love Me

Would you still love me If I let down my smiling mask The one making me seem so alluring As to ignite in those who see me from afar The greenish fires of Envy Would you still love me If I renounce of my alter ego The one which everyone admires And lauds, knowing not that deep down I remain as simple as a blade of grass in a bouquet Would you still love me If I were made of disease Porous, filled with venom Yet, found there where it can be seen not Meant to be revealed only if I deem it best to Would you still love me? Oh I forgot, you love me not How silly of me to ask you such stuff As if, you really did love me As if, you cared for that ugliness which I keep hidden As if, you would dry those tears hidden in the sparkles of my eyes! For Contest Would You Still Love Me Written on 8th Dec 2018 Sponsored by Edward Ibeh

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Date: 12/26/2018 12:04:00 PM
Congratulations for your top win! :)
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Date: 12/25/2018 7:12:00 PM
Amazing!! This is so deep and introspective, I love it! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 12/25/2018 6:06:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Very engaging piece.
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Date: 12/25/2018 4:51:00 PM
Wow! So beautifully poetic Anoucheka! Congratulations on your wonderful First Place win! Mele Kalikimaka! xxoo
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Date: 12/25/2018 1:36:00 PM
Echoing Edward's thoughts: Brilliance, reflecting the light of the writer's intellect and emotions. Dazzling poesy, Anoucheka! Congrats on your top podium prize. ~ Gershon
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Date: 12/25/2018 11:24:00 AM
You really turn the tables in your final verse, Anoucheka. Congratulations on your top win in Edward's contest! Merry Christmas, Carolyn
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 12/25/2018 12:09:00 PM
Thanks for the appreciation Carolyn :)
Date: 12/25/2018 11:16:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest, Anoucheka!:-) This is absolutely brilliant. Congratulations on your top win, and Merry Christmas to you!
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Anoucheka Gangabissoon
Date: 12/25/2018 12:08:00 PM
Wow! Thank you so much...….appreciation for what pours out of us is wonderful!

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