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Would You Still

WOULD YOU STILL? You call me beautiful Would you still? If I unveil my decaying cracks and rotten scars Would my messy acrid baggages be pleasant to your sight? You desire to board my sailing Friend-Ship Would you still? When waters become shallow and runs low Would you still? When the turbulent storms of life puncture and wreck this ship You are intrigued by my unending muse Would you still? If I let you inside the dark maze of my mind and expose my weird idiosyncrasies and lewd thoughts Would you still? When the voices start taunting you You wish to walk in my shoes Would you still? If you see the gory blisters and gashes I get from walking my walk Would you still? When my demons torment you into an abyss of nothingness You are mesmerized by my demure facade Would you still? When I erupt like volcano and spew fiery venom Would you still? When I unleash the treacherous Chaos raging in me You say "I love you" Would you still? When the chips are down and all my cards have been dealt Would this love stand the test of time?

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Date: 10/4/2018 2:25:00 PM
Really nicely done. All important questions I would think, here's hoping the response you receive is what you hope for.
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Dawn Baridor
Date: 10/5/2018 2:32:00 AM
Thank you Mr. Green

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