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Would You Love Me

Would You Love Me If I Wasn’t A Poet? Would you love me if I wasn’t a poet? Writing between the rhymes Building beautifully a wonder from words Sculpting skilfully What in you A mesmerising mirth stirs.. Would you love me? As I dip my whole In the depth of the silence of words And have you hover In the width of my world Impatiently, passionately Pursuing the pounding of my heart.. If I wasn’t a poet, would you love me? The realm I reign Rarely do I take reins A time, attaining the zenith Dazzled and dazed on cloud nine One other time Lost in the dark of my tower Seeking sensibility in a hyper sensitivity And once in a while Daring dimensions Deafening fright Willing to sip From the ocean of valiant hearts.. Would you love me? If I didn’t own a magic wand And the sacred power to wave on words Weave a fairy tale Of true love at first sight.. Would you love me? If I didn’t master the mysteries of words Compose a meaningful music With every beat of the word And paint portraits and landscapes From the realms of fantasy.. Would you love me, if I wasn’t a poet? If I wouldn’t for you Mount mountains Dive seas Dig caves Plough lands Plant trees Wake the sun to stretch her rays And brighten the chambers of your heart And when you crave for a dream I would for you Draw a fascinating golden hour view And choose a rainbow of colours Just for you To behold the glow of the twilight.. Would you love me, if I wasn’t a poet? If I wouldn’t erase “memory “ from my glossary And have you the sole ubiquitous muse Stop the flow of time As I have you in my verse and rhymes And reach for every single word And turn it into a rare gem! Just for you! If I wasn’t a poet, would you love me? Would You Love Me If I Wasn’t A Poet Poetry Contest Sponsor : Silent One September 4th, 2023

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Paghunda Zahid

Date: 11/15/2023 10:35:00 AM

Nicely composed. Hope you are well

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/17/2023 6:00:00 PM

Dearest Besma, Your poem reveals an in-depth picture of ways to show love. So many mystical passages .I especially love~seeking sensibility in a higher sensitivity And once in awhile daring dimensions. You describe your thoughts in such a way and are able to stand back and create such unique perspectives. Wonderful to have your spirit and soul and pen back with us ! I would still love you if you were not a poet ! You are amazing !Congratulations on your first place win . Love and hugs,Susan :)

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 9/14/2023 6:21:00 AM

Dear Besma, it's wonderful to see you back with an enchanting piece of poetry. The theme, the images, the metaphors, the choice of words - everything is just fascinating! Loved your poem, sending to my Faves. Best wishes ~ Mala

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/15/2023 3:33:00 PM

The great delight and honour are truly mine to have you here dear Malabika.. thank you so much for your warm welcome and best wishes.. Your kind words I highly appreciate, deeply grateful.. Looking forward to reading your wonderful poetry.. God bless you. Best regards.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/13/2023 6:40:00 PM

Brilliantly composed every word a diamond stud Besma, congrats on your 1st place win, You shine with this !

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/15/2023 3:29:00 PM

How beautiful your soul is dear Mystic Rose! How kind are your words! Thank you so much dear for your great support and appreciative comment! God bless you. Best regards.

Silent One

Date: 9/13/2023 12:11:00 PM

You wrote for my theme perfectly, I could feel every word and I could relate to every question.. some only fall in love with poets, so if we put our pens down, will love be the same? I think that actions are more important than words.. The use of metaphors in your questions adds to the depth of your poem, just like this question.. From the ocean of valiant hearts.. Would you love me? and the ending really concludes your curiosity I'm so happy the contest inspired you..

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/13/2023 3:53:00 PM

You are a poet in mind and soul and your themes are so inspiring that they stir my humble words so profoundly.. I am deeply grateful to you Silent One for being of great support to me from my first steps here on Poetrysoup.. you have been of great humility to patiently and caringly read and appreciate what I write.. You even have led me to the path of poets of great worth, beauty and humility.. You are of the amazing poets whose artistry and humanity are looked up to.. I can't thank you enough for what you are doing to all those around you who share with you a Life, a vision, a passion.. You mix dream with reality and help make the world a better one! Tremendously happy and honoured to obtain such praise and acknowledgement from you.. deeply grateful to you. My most sincere regards. God bless you.

Silent One
Date: 9/13/2023 12:50:00 PM

Congratulations on your first place..

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/13/2023 7:22:00 AM

I'm pleased to stand beside you on this grand stage, dear Besma. Congratulations on your remarkable triumph in the contest. Your magnificent and exquisite poem truly deserves this prestigious accolade.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/13/2023 8:07:00 AM

I'm truly the one honoured and deeply elated to share such remarkable placement with you, dear Lasaad ! A poet of grandeur whose words and poetry speak volumes of unique beauty, artistry, eloquence and depth.. What you create, paint and shape of your words, visions and feelings deserves to be highly rated and recognised..Thank you so much for your kindness, generosity and humility! Deeply humbled and grateful.. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/13/2023 5:46:00 AM

- What a wonderful poem, Besma ... a crystal clear top winning poem, congratulations :) - hugs

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/13/2023 7:58:00 AM

What a tremendous delight to see you and receive from your so wonderful and kind words of congratulations ! Thank you so much dear Anne-Lise for your graceful presence and honouring words ! God bless you.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/9/2023 7:03:00 AM

I must say, that this is by far one of my favorite writes that I've read written for the contest.. How delicately profound, heartfelt, soul stirring, emotional and poetically vivid are your beautifully enriched words! This is the first poem I've read of yours and I'm already in pure admiration.. "Would you love me if I didn't own a magic wand", "if I wouldn't for you.. Wake the sun to stretch her rays" Woww so elegant and creative! I am definitely in awe of your vocabulary and wordplay.. Love it

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/11/2023 4:34:00 AM

Genuinely and generously overwhelmed by so touching praise and appreciation to my humble words, dear Hiya! How honoured and grateful! How blessed I am to have a beautiful soul of genuine feelings dripping the finest of poetry sharing the passion for poetry! Thank you so much for all the kind appreciative words you have granted me today! God bless you. Best regards.

Sotto Poet

Date: 9/9/2023 6:32:00 AM

Dear, Besma, I am filled with immense joy to see you back in Soup, and I must express my awe at the extraordinary interpretation you have presented for the contest. Your talent in crafting such a remarkable piece is truly commendable. Furthermore, your choice of diction, and the artful use of alliterations, all serve to enhance the power of your writing. The imagery you have conjured is nothing short of brilliant. Your poetic portrayal of love and longing is truly captivating.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/11/2023 3:59:00 AM

Dear Lasaad, I would like to thank you heaps from the depth of my heart for your warm welcome and kind words you dropped gracefully with a remarkable humility.. You have meticulously praised my humble poetry with the finest of words and purest of heart! The tremendous joy and honour are all mine to have you here recognising my humble words and giving great support.. deeply grateful.. God bless you. Best regards.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/5/2023 4:45:00 PM

Lovely poetry, Besma, I could feel your sincerity as I read. Good luck in the contest! Your poem has a nice flow to it. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/8/2023 2:43:00 PM

Oh! Thank you so much for you so kind and generous words! It is truly my delight and honour to receive such wonderful feedback from my friend and fellow poet in Texas! God bless your beautiful soul ! Best regards.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/5/2023 6:02:00 AM

You strike me as very loveable. I very much enjoyed your artful entry.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/5/2023 3:22:00 PM

So deep is my joy you have enjoyed reading my humble entry.. I highly appreciate your honouring visit and your wonderful feedback! Thank you so much, Richard! Best regards and God bless you.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/4/2023 6:08:00 PM

I believe you'd be loved no matter what dear poet, :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/5/2023 2:40:00 AM

Sweet friend how loving you are! Thank you so much for your graceful presence and for so heartfelt and uplifting words! My tremendous pleasure to have you supporting my humble poetry.. God bless your amazing soul.. Best regards.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/4/2023 11:28:00 AM

Your alliterative efforts do you credit. Your arguments are so much to the point. Your free verse flows so smoothly. A pleasure to read your poem. Blessing.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/5/2023 2:37:00 AM

So kind of you my friend Victor to caringly visit my page to support and encourage my humble poetry with your so appreciative generous words.. thank you so much.. always my honour and great delight to see you and read you.. my most sincere salutations and wishes.. God bless you.

Ink Empress

Date: 9/4/2023 7:38:00 AM

Omg my beautiful island poetess, i am so happy to find you here on soup, and wow what an amazing take on the prompt by silent one. You never fail to amaze me with your creative skills. “ if i wouldnt erase memory from my glossary” i especially love that line. And as always your diction, alliterations, how you’ve used the prompt as a refrain etc adds strength to the write. The flow is seamless and your words are evocative and so poetic. “ choose a rainbow of colors just for you”

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/4/2023 9:55:00 AM

And you have your unique and touching, way to value the word of your friends and fellow poets dear friend ! You bring a lot of satisfaction and elation and a sweet feeling that exceeds the one I feel while weaving the words! Thank you so much for being here and humbly and generously giving from your heart, time and effort for the sake of others.. My warmest wishes and deepest regards.. God bless you.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/4/2023 7:40:00 AM

You always have a way with expressing in such a creative manner. I truly am in awe and I absolutely loved reading this evocative and soulful write. So profound and poetic. Im sure silent one will love this one. So happy to see you again

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/4/2023 7:15:00 AM

And choose a rainbow of colors Just for you To behold the glow of the twilight....such beauty to these poetic lines, my friend. A verse of love to behold!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/4/2023 9:50:00 AM

So nice to see you again on my page honouring and supporting my humble poetry.. always grateful to you.. thank you so much dear Vijay for such honour and joy! God bless you. Best regards.

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/4/2023 5:42:00 AM

My dear friend, you have so expertly woven a masterpiece with this amazing creation! Welcome back and may you gift us and this world with such stupendously exceptional creations! Your free verse is amazing and stirs my soul. What a gleaming jewel this one is! A fav.. God bless you

Robert Lindley
Date: 9/15/2023 3:41:00 PM

Tis I my good friend that am so glad you have returned to gift us of your poetic gems. May you be blessed to do so with us here. As you have done with this wonderful gem. God bless you my good friend.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/4/2023 6:27:00 AM

I truly missing a lot being here among poets of grandeur and beauty of soul who cherish the word and strive to better the world .. missing a lot reading your stunning poetry dear Robert.. you are of remarkable humility to so beautifully praise my humble words! Thank you so much for being here to warmly welcome my poetry and show great support and genuine encouragement.. I'm looking forward to reading your fountains of Faith Hope insight and artistry! Mt warmest wishes and deepest regards. God bless you.

Tom Woody

Date: 9/4/2023 5:27:00 AM

My goodness! Your English usage has advanced by leaps and bounds. I truly think this is the best I've read from you, and that's saying alot because you are quite the poetess. And you are someone who is easy to love, because you give so much out in return. Welcome back Besma

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 9/4/2023 5:53:00 AM

What a genuine generous and heartfelt welcome, Tom! Home is poetrysoup to me.. no matter how long I'm away, I hold so dear the fact that I belong here.. I'm shown care, Love and recognition .. I have grown here and learned how to venetate the word and be a poet.. I'm deeply grateful to you for your wonderful uplifting words and your sincere praise.. always an immense pleasure to read you.. God bless you.