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Would You Let Me Win

I seek no contest - cause I'm already in a one... I'm in a contest to break your walls and reach your heart... I'm in a contest to earn your trust and to be your ultimate lust.. Contest to steal your love... And contest to capture your soul.... But......... Would you let me win ?

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Eric Boddie

Date: 1/27/2016 3:27:00 PM

would you let me conquer....the feminine treasure from down under....would you let me beat....you in the race where there is no defeat....would you let me accomplish....a level of Love So True it will astonish....would you let me proclaim victory....over your heart and all its mystery....in short, would you let ME win....if the answer is no, then Love will never truly begin....very Beautiful and inspiring dalia....;)

Dalia Shahein
Date: 1/27/2016 3:41:00 PM

Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet sweet comment, I'm delighted by ur lovely words and by your beautiful, delightful visit, hugs / / :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 12/31/2015 8:06:00 PM

Very interesting. We don't always end up with what we intended for ourselves. Love is a very strange game in that it is a partnership. So, may you experience some good luck!!!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/31/2015 10:46:00 PM

Thank you so much for ur amazing feedback and your mesmerizing , and delightful comment...much of appreciation...hugs / / :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/30/2015 10:14:00 PM

Interesting one, Dalia...I know the feeling, being stuck in a contest.. perhaps you will win, I'm rooting for you. : ) Always, Laura

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/31/2015 12:08:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear laura for your great comment , I appreciate your lovely words, happy new year and hugs / / :)

White Sage

Date: 12/30/2015 6:00:00 PM

you've competed in such great way, you'd win if it were me, so am sure you will win...nice write

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/30/2015 6:03:00 PM

Hahaha , thank you very much my friend for ur lovely and delightful words , much of appreciation....Happy new year and hugs / / :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/30/2015 12:35:00 PM

A wonderful write Dalia... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/30/2015 1:37:00 PM

Thank you my friend for ur sweet comment , happy new year for u 2...hugs / / :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/30/2015 2:05:00 AM

Brilliant poem, I sure bet he would!

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/30/2015 7:15:00 AM

Thank you my dear for ur lovely comment , lot of appreciation...hugs / / :)

Justin Bordner

Date: 12/29/2015 10:36:00 PM

We win Love's Contest when there is no contest, when the hearts involved give victory to eachother through the result of unstoppable desire, destiny placing the gold on their soul's heartbeats Dalia...J.A.B.

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/30/2015 12:04:00 AM

Thank you my dear for your delightful comment and ur lovely words , I'm glad u liked it...hugs / / :)

Jan Allison

Date: 12/29/2015 8:10:00 PM

I'm sure he would say yes:-) hugs Jan xx

Dalia Shahein
Date: 12/30/2015 12:03:00 AM

Thank you very much my dear for ur sweet comment, appreciate it, hugs / / :)