Would You Chanso -Edited

Would you bring for me a rose bouquet?
Were I your love, that would be so sweet.
Surely it would brighten up my day.

And might you bring chocolates for me?
So sweet that would be. Am I your love -
the only one that you want to see?

And for me, a small bird would you bring?
Your love would feel like a melody
each time I heard the pretty bird sing.

Poetry from you I’d love to hear.
A melody with it too – so nice!
How I’d love to hear you sing it, Dear.

If none of these you’d bring, I’d not care.
So nice it is just to see your face.
How I would love just to have you there. . .

your face when I wakened and at night
your arms around me holding me tight.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
July 15, 2023 at 10:30 AM
Sweet romantic write Andrea. Congratulations! :)
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 6:34 PM
A sweet chanso, Andrea! Congratulations!
Rolland Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 5:08 PM
such loving words, hope he will do, perhaps for mother's day ??? would be nice ??? thanks fo the beautiful and romantic poem thanks
Buhagiar Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 1:02 AM
Superb and romantic. You inserted all the lovely ingredients of poetry. Hugs.
Hawley Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 7:54 PM
Fantastic job! Nice rhyme and rhythm there. Also low key this is kind of a rap. Please note I said "LOW KEY".
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 8:49 AM
i could be a romantic rapper, haha
Bell Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 8:27 AM
All you need is someone in your life, someone to wake up with. I think you're on a winner.
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 12:46 PM
i have that, Paul. But romance would be nice. haha
Turner Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 7:08 AM
Nice write, Andrea. Sometimes all we need is a little hug:) Happy Mother's Day young lady!
Ricci Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 4:36 AM
Good Morning Andrea. I love this. The entry is so poetic and has all elements attached. Truly. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent with us. Have a wonderful morning. Blessings always (smile)
Mcintosh Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 1:32 AM
Beautiful. I just love this. Wishing you a win. God bless you sweet friend, Love, Gina
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