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Would You Care

If I was to die tomorrow, would you care? If I were to tell you every secret I have, would you care? If I gave you everything you ever wanted, would you care? If I told you I love you every second of everyday, would you care? If I was to die tomorrow, would you care? I would do anything just to get you to care about me for even a few minutes. I would hold you and never let go. I would tell you how much I love you everyday. I would give you the world. I would take a bullet for you, just so you would care about me as I was taking my last breath....

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Date: 3/19/2011 5:26:00 PM
wow very strong and sad too! Hope you feel better, welcome to Soup. Ligfht & Love
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Date: 3/19/2011 12:45:00 PM
thank you :)
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Date: 3/19/2011 10:26:00 AM
of course i will care. this is a good expressionistic poetry you have here
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