Would You Be Mine

Neat, really cool. Anyone could use this for a Valentine Card. Excellent.

Yes my friend I know that question I would be yours if you be mine

Linda This is a charming and cute write. Your love and devotion shines through with this silly and inventive rhyme. Nice job Hugs

Dear oh dear, I love it!!! Sorry If I didn't comment on the rest of your work it's only because I didn't read them yet. Please be patient with me as I read very carefully. Love, Ali

PD cannot access your poetry pages after page one, trying to get help from soup... Oh and in answer to your poem title..YES

lucky Natham,,,, nice poem...

I'm stopping by here once again to say, I might be posting a return poem soon, lol, The return of greatest friend, a greatest sister and greatest poet! YOU'RE REALLY MY BEST HERE! love always, Leonora

I'm glad to read this poem today my dearest friend, Linda. I love it! I'M EXTREMELY HAPPY to hear from you again. Well, no matter what you think and say, I want you to know (cross my heart & honestly), you're my # 1 favourite and friend of mine here! Am not getting any younger too but, I'm trying to forget about my age because it will only make me feel older (smile). Just enjoy life ok. Well, I am always here wishing you all the best, luck and happiness in life. God bless you always!Love,LG

I noticed alot of poets on here writing about valentines I know you have read mine and I comented on your other one I dont think you can defie love were all in the dark when it comes rto love I only wish Id joined the soup in feburay Id love to be yourt valintine x david scott

PD, that poem is such an old one that it's not even in my files on microsoft anymore. I just found half of it in an box. The first half where I was crying the most, I"m afraid is gone forever. The poem was very very long. All I can think to do is to show pieces of it. Just kind of modify it, and show what I can. Please let me know if you will keep the contest open another half hour and I'll try to post it. Thanks, Andrea (I am not a super emotional person so it's probably hard to tell how sad I was when I wrote it!) luv, andrea

I enjoyed this, it made me smile:) keep writing.

This was way to sweet. Loved it girl. Lovely.

in this form, i can accept love so pure, in this form, i accept love i do. so willingly and so heavenly i do, forsaking all others i do.

thank you 4 my sweet good place, on the totem of your space, Thanks p.d. i think we share, love of poetry anywhere, just so it flows n goes, and chimes...lines...so.

love is sweet and cant compete, with sentiments like those, poor ol johnson has smelly feet, put em in the ashes spose, an aboriginal cure...

To Be Or Not To Be Indeed that will be the question, crazy but lovely in a way.I enjoyed reading it.God bless you. Hugs!Erich

I'll be your Valentine too, PD!! I will need a huge box of chocolates, throw in a few diamonds,....lots of pink fuzzy feathers,....and let's see......nvm...skip the crazy glue! ha ha. You are a hoot, sister!! You always get me giggling...like the Reading Rainbow...take a look, it's in a book. A reading rainbow! I can do anything! A reading rainbow!! Love, Gwendolen

very very cool one ,Irma!! ME LIKES thanks for the roses back. I wish I were not so busy. I would love to do blogs and read more poems here today. Joe isn't working at the moment. It's crazy around here. Can't get a thing done. hahaha.

A sweet poem for your sweetie. Have a wonderful day tomorrow both of you. love phyl

He better watch out.........George

Beautiful poem p.d. love Elizabeth

Awww, what a sweet piece for the love of your life, PD

awww how loverly PD mu BFF and Nate is lucky to have a special lady like u to luv him so.. true luv is defined by many things.. respect for each other ..compassion .. thoughtfulness.. in good times and bad staying faithful .. sensuality for sure.. when the fire is gone so is the romance so keeping it alive involves ideas and craziness .. smiles go a long way for true luv to survive.. compromise.. discussion and communication.. all signs of true luv my friend.. once u got it.. yours to keep.

That's a question you don't have to ask duh of course I be love you always my sweet valentine

Love can never be defined absolutely, but from few corners of human feeling that may be expressed a little about that. I am trying to write from your inspiration next after few minutes. You are really Destroyer of Poet". My honor, bl