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Would You

If I stood in your presence would it be the same, Would you still love me when I make mistakes, Would you still embrace me if I fall short of love, When everything looks not as is should be, would you still hold my heart, Would you walk the extra mile if I could not longer stand, Would you accept me for who I am, When we look in the mirror past the flaws and disfunction, Do we still have the strength to see all the love underneath this,

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Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 9/15/2016 3:03:00 AM

loving writing Cortney, hope the answer was yes!, have blessed day, Gordon

Cortney Bartholomew
Date: 9/16/2016 6:46:00 AM

Thank you, Gordon :) the answer was yes the whole time....when my eyes fall short, the Lord always reminds me, especially when I write my heart out through here, good or bad, he's with us through it all God Bless!! :)

Dm Babbit

Date: 9/8/2016 10:03:00 PM

True love does.

Cortney Bartholomew
Date: 9/16/2016 6:36:00 AM

Yes, it does thank you :)

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/8/2016 9:02:00 PM

I enjoyed your poemso muchI read 3 times.Good job.

Cortney Bartholomew
Date: 9/16/2016 6:35:00 AM

Thank you :)