Would You

If I stood in your presence would it be the same,
Would you still love me when I make mistakes,
Would you still embrace me if I fall short of love,
When everything looks not as is should be, would you still hold my heart,
Would you walk the extra mile if I could not longer stand,
Would you accept me for who I am,
When we look in the mirror past the flaws and disfunction,
Do we still have the strength to see all the love underneath this,
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Mcconnell Avatar
September 15, 2016 at 3:03 AM
loving writing Cortney, hope the answer was yes!, have blessed day, Gordon
Bartholomew Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 6:46 AM
Thank you, Gordon :) the answer was yes the whole time....when my eyes fall short, the Lord always reminds me, especially when I write my heart out through here, good or bad, he's with us through it all God Bless!! :)
Babbit Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 10:03 PM
True love does.
Bartholomew Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 6:36 AM
Yes, it does thank you :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2016 at 9:02 PM
I enjoyed your poemso muchI read 3 times.Good job.
Bartholomew Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 6:35 AM
Thank you :)
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