Would You

Would you like to see a world with no more sickness,suffering, or even death,
surely this would sound appealing to the ears of the ones listening.
Would you like to live in a world with no more war,crime,violence 
or hatred.

How do you like the sound of this, would living in a beautiful paradise on 
earth be amazing and  pure bliss, could any of this ever take place
what would we need to eradict to bring it about.

Peace would need to dwell on earth like the dew, ridding the earth of all evil and
wicked ones, would help eliminate and cleansing the world and
starting a new.

Then what else would we need to do, well can we really cure sickness and even death,
not on our own as mere humans but if we bring the creator in the picture and his
word then this can be observed.

God is the rightful one to undue all this chaos and turmoil of this desperate and
pittiable world that we now live, if we think about it he has given more
than we need to enjoy life,despite the troubles and suffering much strife,
we can still get pleasure from our life.

Our Creator is going to bring about a Peaceful new Earth and 
this is something Worth living for and gives meaning and
a positve hope and happy outlook, helping
us now in this world to cope with the many problems
and pressures life brings we can be burdened down
but still our hearts sing with gladness as we know
that soon all badness will be gone and then we can
All Live in Peace and be At one with eachother
even calling everyone Sister and Brother.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/21/2012 1:25:00 PM
It sounds like a PERFECT world Leanne, love it. - Very well written - thank you - oxox love Anne-Lise
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