Avery Won Poet Rhyme

Worth the Wait - Sg

Checking my watch one last time
Waiting for your face
Looking down the corridor
Just an empty space...

Now you're five years late
You're never coming back, but
You're still worth the wait

6/15/2021

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Michelle Faulkner July 10, 2021 at 5:29 PM This is so wistful, longing tinged with hope, very effective write, congratulatins on your placement~ Avery Won July 12, 2021 at 4:30 AM Thank you Michelle :)

Rama Balasubramanian July 9, 2021 at 10:04 PM WoW! Good one! Wish someone waited for me like that. Congratulations Avery Won July 12, 2021 at 4:30 AM Thank you :)

Christuraj Alex July 9, 2021 at 8:42 PM Beautiful creation. Congratulations! Avery Won July 12, 2021 at 4:30 AM Thank you so much

Beata Agustin July 9, 2021 at 8:28 PM Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... expressed in your awesome poetic style. God bless you. Avery Won July 12, 2021 at 4:30 AM Thank you Beata!

Unseeking Seeker July 9, 2021 at 8:03 PM Ah! The pining heart! Avery Won July 12, 2021 at 4:29 AM <3

William Kelii Kekaula July 9, 2021 at 5:05 PM A humorous piece, Avery, remarkably done rhythmically, as well as, phonetcally. Thank you for your participation and honorable placement my friend, Aloha! Avery Won July 12, 2021 at 4:29 AM Ty for the placement :)

L Milton Hankins June 15, 2021 at 10:43 AM Tightly-written, lovely sentiment, Avery. I enjoyed it so much. Avery Won June 15, 2021 at 11:18 AM Thank you :)

Rama Balasubramanian June 15, 2021 at 10:15 AM What a love. Rarely seen! Avery Won June 15, 2021 at 11:18 AM Thank you!