Heidi Sands Poet Rhyme

Worth the Wait

The clouds light up like lightbulbs, as the sun sets beyond the hill
Some are tinted gray, with bright shining edges of white
They are spread all over the place, above the pine trees so still
A moving transformation of the last beautiful moments of daylight

Animals speak as birds call from the woods, chipmunks scamper fast
The air is still and warm, from this nice day to celebrate
Every minute the sunlight hangs on and continues to last
The sky transitions in full circle and it is well worth the wait

Heidi Sands

Written yesterday 5/3/20

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Jennifer Proxenos May 10, 2020 at 12:11 PM Hi Heidi, a wonderful poem about sunsets, The sky transitions in full circle and it is well worth the wait - lovely Heidi - something we should all remember! Blessings my dear friend, Jennifer. Heidi Sands May 10, 2020 at 3:26 PM Thank you very much Jennifer. Blessings to you too. :)

Charlie Smith May 9, 2020 at 10:27 AM Worth the wait indeed Dear Heidi... Heidi Sands May 10, 2020 at 7:35 AM It is worth the wait, yes. Thank you Charlie. I hope all is well. Take care :)

Gordon Mcconnell May 9, 2020 at 7:57 AM A lovely piece Heidi telling how we should appreciate nature when we have daylight to enjoy it in its glory. Take care, Blessings always,Gordon Heidi Sands May 9, 2020 at 8:38 AM Thank you Gordon. I appreciate your nice feedback. :)

Quoth Theraven May 5, 2020 at 10:29 PM Heidi, How are you doing this day? I've seen thousands of them; sunsets. yet you bring something new in yours. Something I never bargained for. -Richard Heidi Sands May 6, 2020 at 6:51 AM Wow. Amazing that this could bring something new after seeing thousands of sunsets. Thank you very much. I am ok , tired , but waiting for this heart test to begin. Have a great day :)

Vijay Pandit May 5, 2020 at 6:33 AM Charming creation in verses of nature--enjoyed the read--well written, Heidi. Heidi Sands May 5, 2020 at 8:56 AM Thank you Vijay. I am happy you enjoyed this I appreciate your kind comment :)

Tom Cunningham May 5, 2020 at 2:02 AM Like sunrise, the end of the day is special too, love the imagery in your verse Heidi. Hope your going from strength to strength. Tom Heidi Sands May 5, 2020 at 8:54 AM Hi Tom. Yes, the sunset at the end of the day is special. Thank you. Yes, I am getting much better. I have a heart test tomorrow. A sore throat is lingering, but I see doctor later this week and will be retested for Covid as well and then tested for antibody later. Take care :)

Gershon Wolf May 4, 2020 at 7:50 PM Love how those sunny days hang on! Like you say, 'Well worth the wait!" Nice one! :) gw Heidi Sands May 5, 2020 at 8:52 AM The sunsets are certainly well worth the wait. Thank you Gershonn. I hope all is well :)