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Worse Than the Moor

The pain is unbearable, all that has been done- Desecrated! Never trusted- left in the dark, I’m in darkness now! Forever lost in this abyss, everything is meaningless! No end to the pain- the heartaches... though long broken, the hope thrust away! Left to rot- All is dark- the soul dims- it’s over the pain finally gone- Death has come...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/18/2012 9:49:00 PM
Good write even though it is depressing to most folks.
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Date: 8/16/2012 6:41:00 PM
//This is an older poem written a few years ago, just recently edited it for publishing I will be uploading more soon.
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Date: 8/16/2012 1:29:00 PM
A very moving written poem - Yes, it is dark today..... tomorrow is a new day.....you will find love again. - Well written - - - be happy. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Luis Martinez-Rivera
Date: 8/16/2012 1:30:00 PM
oh i am, i havr a wonderful girlfriend and we've been together for over a year now.
Date: 8/16/2012 12:56:00 AM
Sad,very sad write.
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