Worn Polished Shoes

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                                         New shoes only best
                                          Italian Loafers_His
                                       Make do__children first
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Sweetheart Avatar
April 20, 2010 at 7:23 AM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest.. another amazing write and wonderful win for u ..my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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April 20, 2010 at 4:58 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Still Life Sara. Love, Carol
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April 19, 2010 at 2:38 PM
Congratulations Sara on your win in Raul's fine contest with this wonderful poem >> James,x
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April 19, 2010 at 12:43 PM
Sara, congratulations with your placement in my contest...Raul
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April 18, 2010 at 4:54 AM
Great Senryu, Sara and best wishes for the contest!...Hope you'll be having a nice weekend and thanky for your nice comments....Gert
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April 18, 2010 at 2:38 AM
I didn't know what they were. ARe they loafers then? Yes, Sara, I can see what you mean in your interpretation of the picture, to make do and put children first. My mom always did that with her many children! good luck in the contest and thanks for being so understanding! Luv, andrea
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April 17, 2010 at 11:10 PM
great!
Mehta Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 10:17 PM
A fine senryu. Good luck in the contest
Mckenzie Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 7:39 PM
Sara~ Sounds like a true father putting kids first! Best wishes on your interesting entry! Laura :)
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April 17, 2010 at 5:24 PM
Sounds like a father with the best of priorities, Sara. Excellent! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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April 17, 2010 at 4:59 PM
enjoyed mom!
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April 17, 2010 at 4:26 PM
Always putting family first!! Yes, that is what we do! ~ Nicely done!~ Carrie
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