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Worn Polished Shoes

. New shoes only best Italian Loafers_His Make do__children first

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Date: 4/20/2010 7:23:00 AM
Congrats Sara on your winning poem and placement in Raul's contest.. another amazing write and wonderful win for u ..my friend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 4/20/2010 4:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Still Life Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/19/2010 2:38:00 PM
Congratulations Sara on your win in Raul's fine contest with this wonderful poem >> James,x
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Date: 4/19/2010 12:43:00 PM
Sara, congratulations with your placement in my contest...Raul
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Date: 4/18/2010 4:54:00 AM
Great Senryu, Sara and best wishes for the contest!...Hope you'll be having a nice weekend and thanky for your nice comments....Gert
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Date: 4/18/2010 2:38:00 AM
I didn't know what they were. ARe they loafers then? Yes, Sara, I can see what you mean in your interpretation of the picture, to make do and put children first. My mom always did that with her many children! good luck in the contest and thanks for being so understanding! Luv, andrea
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Date: 4/17/2010 11:10:00 PM
great!
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Date: 4/17/2010 10:17:00 PM
A fine senryu. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/17/2010 7:39:00 PM
Sara~ Sounds like a true father putting kids first! Best wishes on your interesting entry! Laura :)
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Date: 4/17/2010 5:24:00 PM
Sounds like a father with the best of priorities, Sara. Excellent! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:59:00 PM
enjoyed mom!
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:32:00 PM
Love it Sara--quite original--rick
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Date: 4/17/2010 4:26:00 PM
Always putting family first!! Yes, that is what we do! ~ Nicely done!~ Carrie
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