Worlds Apart

Worlds apart are we a windswept leaf and me drifting forever on a current heading back to the past

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 3/15/2023 4:37:00 PM

This is a Fav, for me, Gershon. You have captured how I feel to a Tee. (no pun intended) A keeper for me. I wish it had come from my pen. Awesome Verse.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/15/2023 7:11:00 PM

Gosh! I appreciate the fave, Shirley. Interesting comment you've made here. Thanks, gw

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/15/2023 6:13:00 AM

You may be closer than you think. Son of a Sage:) Good to read your thoughts this morning.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/15/2023 7:12:00 PM

This 'son of a sage' keeps showing his age! (Oy, vey).

Fin Chuuk

Date: 3/14/2023 9:02:00 PM

A foot in front of the other and push through it. You’re awesome, Sunny :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 3/15/2023 7:12:00 PM

I don't know if I'm awesome or not, but I can still put one front in front of another (on a good day). :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/14/2023 8:09:00 PM

Hi Gershon, Wing and a prayer. Very nice past in your Worlds Apart. Fly on. -Richard