World War Whatever

Standing on the fantail of a warship on patrol,
Its wake stretching off to from where I’d come,
Transporting me back to my first day aboard,
Three long deployments ago.

I’d learned about things like a bucket of steam, 
A sky hook, and a left-handed marlinspike.
When sent below to fetch a fireman’s punch,
I came back with both shoulders bruised.

Now, beneath this cold Comanche moon, 
I find calm in the grace of self-reflection,
And remember certain bitter confrontations,
Where the only honest words were angry ones.

I sincerely regret all my barbarous cruelties, 
But I make no apologies for being a survivor,
While taking the heat on the South China Sea,
Waiting for World War Whatever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2022 at 10:30 AM
Could it be World War Whatever is the internet (www.) beneath this cold Comanche moon. I remember working on Ford Island waiting for the small boat and thinking how people were standing there like me, not expecting war to come to their doorstep. Love your last verse.
Hankins Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 8:26 PM
It sounds like a world of exciting adventure most of us can only dream about, Michael. Good writing. I enjoy your work.
Kalavik Avatar
June 6, 2022 at 8:31 PM
Thank you. It's all true, except the parts that aren't.
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