World Series Home Run

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The World Series is the Championship (Series) of Major League Baseball. A home run is its most spectacular crowd-pleaser...

At first
Got hurt

Bad knee
Let's see

Docs say
X-ray

No break
Drugs take

And then
Again

Game day
Will play

Home run
We won!

Fans say
Hurray!

What fun
All done

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Alexis Y.

Date: 7/17/2019 5:18:00 PM

Hi Gershon, Not much of a baseball fan but I did enjoy this piece. Great job:-) Alexis

Alexis Y.
Date: 7/17/2019 5:53:00 PM

That's because I am a fan of your poetry:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2019 5:32:00 PM

I'm impressed that you even gave this one a read -- let alone a nice comment -- given that you're not much of a baseball fan. Thank you so much, Alexis! :) gw

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/17/2019 3:38:00 PM

Great one Gershon. The world series is fun to watch :) and the home run exciting !

Gershon Wolf
Date: 7/17/2019 4:58:00 PM

It is exciting. It's one of the only events I can watch or listen to even if a local rooting interest is not involved. Thanks for the feedback, Heidi! :) gw