World of Walls

Mother, mother, tell me please
the way it used to be
When people all around the world lived in harmony
Tell me how they looked and dressed
were they short or tall
Tell me of the fun you had
before they built the wall
Do you think your friend’s the same as in the photograph 
The faded one you carry
where you and she both laugh
Did the children play our games 
when we were still all friends 
Could there not have been a way for all to make amends
Was their music much like ours can you recall a tune
And how you danced together 
beneath the giant moon
Tell me how they cooked their foods 
about the spices used
Tell me of the taste you loved when all the flavors fused

And how about their languages
the sounds that their words made
Do you still remember or did they sadly fade
Fear and anger built the walls 
of massive steel and stone 
They said we would be better, divided and alone
But now there’s a consensus 
that is spreading through the land
That all the people, everywhere are going to take a stand 
So mother please, do not be sad
the talk around the town
From all the people, everywhere
the walls are coming down

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Date: 9/28/2023 12:05:00 PM
Lovely penning Samia, with nice rhyme and flow. Enjoyable writing indeed. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 9/27/2023 12:06:00 PM
Hello Samia, I really enjoyed reading your "World of walls" today, and especially loved the last paragragh about the walls are coming down. Words and thoughts have more power than we realise. And so those walls will indeed come down. Have a beautiful day :-)
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Date: 8/1/2023 1:16:00 PM
Taste is a sweet word. I could almost taste your words , like a cotton candy flavour of jelly bean or salt water taffy
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 8/1/2023 2:49:00 PM
Thank you ?? so much LeRoy!
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 8/1/2023 2:47:00 PM
Thank you ?? so much LeRoy!
Date: 4/29/2023 8:04:00 AM
A very beautiful and well written poem.I like the lyrical rhythm and the metaphorical expression used throughout the piece.It has a unique balance.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/29/2023 8:13:00 AM
Thank you ?? so much Christine!
Date: 9/10/2022 4:28:00 AM
Hopefully the walls come down in unity as this inspiring beautiful poem says in rhyming. It recalls the past in a superb rhyming wow! Kudos! <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/29/2023 8:14:00 AM
A belated thank you ?? thank you!
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