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World of Walls

Mother, mother, tell me please, the way it used to be When people all around the world once lived in harmony Tell me how they looked and dressed, were they short or tall Tell me of the fun you had before they built the wall Do you think your friend’s the same as in the photograph The faded one you carry, where you and she both laugh Did the children play our games when we were still all friends Could there not have been a way, for all to make amends Was their music much like ours, can you recall a tune And how you danced together underneath the giant moon Tell me how they cooked their foods, about the spices used And of the taste you loved so much, when all the flavors fused And how about their languages, the sounds that their words made Do you still remember or did they sadly fade Fear and anger built the walls of massive steel and stone They said we would be better, divided and alone But now there’s a consensus that is spreading through the land That all the people, everywhere, are going to take a stand So mother please, do not be sad, the talk around the town From all the people, everywhere, the walls are coming down

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Date: 9/28/2023 12:05:00 PM
Lovely penning Samia, with nice rhyme and flow. Enjoyable writing indeed. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 9/27/2023 12:06:00 PM
Hello Samia, I really enjoyed reading your "World of walls" today, and especially loved the last paragragh about the walls are coming down. Words and thoughts have more power than we realise. And so those walls will indeed come down. Have a beautiful day :-)
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Date: 8/1/2023 1:16:00 PM
Taste is a sweet word. I could almost taste your words , like a cotton candy flavour of jelly bean or salt water taffy
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 8/1/2023 2:49:00 PM
Thank you ?? so much LeRoy!
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 8/1/2023 2:47:00 PM
Thank you ?? so much LeRoy!
Date: 4/29/2023 8:04:00 AM
A very beautiful and well written poem.I like the lyrical rhythm and the metaphorical expression used throughout the piece.It has a unique balance.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/29/2023 8:13:00 AM
Thank you ?? so much Christine!
Date: 9/10/2022 4:28:00 AM
Hopefully the walls come down in unity as this inspiring beautiful poem says in rhyming. It recalls the past in a superb rhyming wow! Kudos! <<<<<<<>>>>>>>^^^^^^^>>>>><<<<<<<< Plz read and comment my newest poem too.
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Samia Ali Salama
Date: 4/29/2023 8:14:00 AM
A belated thank you ?? thank you!

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