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World of Violence

World of violence As the morning slowly breaks and, daylight in fil trates... I feel, the sunshine- burn away the grey I feel, the dawning, of a brand new day I wish, the clouds would confiscate the rain... ease the pain ... as I awaken, to a world of violence. In a world not far away another bullet pen e trates... another, black soul it takes Did you hear his cries... for mercy? Will his words be heard by... the jury? Or, is justice, controlled by the hand with the gun? Answers...no one! Can't we just stop... the violence? They say human nature hates... so just surrender to the fates so...does that mean it's too late? Why is it so hard for us to be kind? Is this the end of humankind? Or, Is it true... that only the strong survive? Or is it better... having God on our side? Aren't you tired of this world of violence? I am. John Derek Hamilton November 09, 2018

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Funom Makama

Date: 12/22/2018 10:19:00 AM

This is beautiful with the exhibition of the zenith of poetic craft.I love the passion, expressions and beautiful lines... Merry christmas and a wonderful 2019.

John Hamilton
Date: 12/22/2018 1:18:00 PM

Thanks Funom

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/13/2018 9:39:00 PM

Yes, I am too, John. Your poignant poem shines a sensitive and thought provoking light on the sad state of affairs of today’s society. Mankind is not kind, it’s so sad to say. Your poem is beautifully rhythmic with awesome rhymes that raises questions and illustrates your point perfectly. Exceptional poetry, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

John Hamilton
Date: 12/14/2018 9:42:00 AM

Thanks Susan, so kind of you to pass by with your thoughtful comment.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 12/7/2018 6:42:00 PM

Hello John, it would be sp nice to see the violence end. have a nice evening my friend.

John Hamilton
Date: 12/7/2018 8:38:00 PM

Thanks Darlene

Phillip Garcia

Date: 11/23/2018 12:12:00 AM

Well done John. Very poignant piece. The obvious truths are always the most simple truths. Maybe one day we'll figure it out as a whole. Until then, keep reminding us with wonderful words such as these

John Hamilton
Date: 11/23/2018 11:49:00 AM

Hey Phillip nice to see you pass by, hope all is well, thanks for the kind visit.

Gordon Mcconnell

Date: 11/20/2018 9:04:00 AM

Beautifully penned piece John, hitting the nail on the head, written with good rhyme and flow too. Blessings, Gordon

John Hamilton
Date: 11/20/2018 9:49:00 AM

Thanks Gordon, nice of you to pass by my page with your kind words!

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 11/13/2018 4:51:00 PM

I am too...beautiful poetry, John. I appreciate your musings. Too many cries go unheard these days. Looking forward to a better time, for all. Always, Laura

John Hamilton
Date: 11/15/2018 11:00:00 AM

Thanks Laura, I appreciate the kind visit and words!