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World Cruise--Veranda Beach

World Cruise...Veranda Beach (Acrostic) Without a doubt this place is a perfect peach Overnight stay you don’t have to pay at Veranda Beach Really dirt cheap my own keep and don’t have to leech Living like a King on my wee little wing what a reach Dining and reclining my private wine I do beseech Comfort of home under my dome I like the view Rules don’t apply as I eat on the fly and grab another brew Under the sun having fun greeting people as they pass thru Initial reaction I get my satisfaction with a skeleton crew Sand all around with uncut grass abound my dinner is due Enjoying the weather all huddled together with a bad hairdo. Oct.06.2017 World Cruise Sponsored by: Kevin Shaw

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Afolabi Muideen

Date: 10/8/2017 2:52:00 PM

A beautiful and stylish write. What a great! It flows eloquent, i enjoyed the read. Thanks for sharing.

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/7/2017 7:16:00 AM

This is an incredible Acrostic my friend! You have amazed me by your skill at rhyming with those end rhymes, it's not easy sometimes coming up with a good one...it can stump you! But you did write them with seeming ease, but I know better, it was rough wasn't it? What a masterful piece, Great Work!!

Maria Williams

Date: 10/7/2017 6:05:00 AM

Verandah Beach World Cruise sounds like a lot of fun WW and the best thing is its dirt cheap, and you don't have to worry about a bad hair day. Couldn't get better then that!! Good luck in the contest ...Maria

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/6/2017 9:58:00 PM

I love your take on the theme Winged Warrior, it makes me smile, and I love your rhyme in this wonderful write. It sounds like a great place to be! Good luck in the contest!