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World Around Me

The first time I opened my eyes To the world full of many lies I learned something around me Looking everywhere, so much to see Killing of people, wars for selfish reasons Fighting for positions, cases for abortions Hunger for power, unstoppable Drug addictions, uncontrollable I see death with my eyes, a horrible sight A bad experience, but I’m absolutely right For Debbie’s Contest March 12, 2013

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Date: 3/13/2013 9:12:00 AM
This is excellent write about the reality of life now a days my dear friend, Maria!I love it so much. This is already a winner for me. Thank you so much again for your precious time reading and enjoying my poems leaving me wonderful and inspirational comments. Good luck always and take care! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 3/12/2013 3:38:00 PM
Those who believe life is easy to live ....... open your eyes! - Very well written, Maria. - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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