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World Above the Clouds

Far away from this bonded crowd, Far away from these layers of shroud, Oh wings of the air glide me away, To the world, world above the clouds. To the giant mountains of mist, Where sparkling houses of rain will be built, World beneath where would be moving, And sun rays where will be cold and soothing. Where I won’t be bound by laws, And I could speak freely about the things I love aloud, Yeah to the world with cloud above the clouds, Where everything just everything will be allowed. Sliding on morning dews that stays till night, Diving in the night’s sky that looks like morning light, With no paths to follow, I’ll glide free and fast, Yawing, pitching, bouncing, shouting, Like the endless penumbra it’s unknown where I’ll last Yeah endless it is, And it’s unknown where I’ll last For Above the CloudsContest I think I am late :-( posting this anyways

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Date: 1/25/2021 6:18:00 PM
Lovely ~ congrats on having this poem published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 7/27/2019 8:50:00 PM
This is nice. It has a dreamy floating feel. Sounds like a beautiful escape. Would have been a winner if you entered it. Best, SuZ
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Date: 6/27/2019 9:05:00 PM
Ethereally penned, my friend! :) gw
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/28/2019 2:10:00 AM
Thank you it means a lot :)
Date: 11/8/2015 6:00:00 PM
divine poem Shiraz 7 hugs
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/28/2019 2:10:00 AM
Thank you ma'am
Date: 8/16/2013 8:23:00 AM
WOW! Lovely...free and beautiful! I see you have the soul of a dreamer! I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for your visit! :)
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Date: 8/12/2013 8:26:00 PM
Oh my! I came to read a poem...:-( a new one from you... ha ha you teased ... Now I have to leave another smile on your poem... :-) Shiraz, I hope you find time to post another poem. always a fan.... LINDA aka PD
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Date: 7/1/2013 10:27:00 PM
a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT
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Date: 6/29/2013 11:48:00 AM
THANKS for viewing my poem and a hearty congratulations on wining a contest with a deserving poem !!!
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Date: 6/28/2013 7:37:00 AM
This is a winner Shiraz...mesmerizing poetry. You have magic in your words always...I am a fan of your poetry..Bidhu
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Date: 6/28/2013 12:21:00 AM
you made the contest, and it is I whom is late in reading this excellent poetry, belated congrats to you..
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/28/2013 1:18:00 AM
Thank you sir glad you liked it.Am going through your works and i must say am enjoying my time at ps
Date: 6/27/2013 8:09:00 AM
Good morning Shiraz, hope to see a new one from you soon... I think we have many great contest going on at the moment. maybe i should try one out myself.. xox~ LINDA
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/27/2013 7:58:00 PM
Thank you for visit my friend will post the new one soon :-)
Date: 6/26/2013 12:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Shiraz. Enjoyed reading your poem... David
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/27/2013 3:37:00 AM
Thank you David
Date: 6/25/2013 9:49:00 PM
Shiraz, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/27/2013 3:36:00 AM
Thank you Linda
Date: 6/25/2013 7:18:00 PM
Glad you made it on time, also glad to read such a fine piece of writing. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/25/2013 2:31:00 PM
Your entry made it just in time. :) You did great with this piece. I like how you mention going forward at the end of this piece, while still admitting that sense of uncertainty. Great work! Thanks so much for your contribution to my contest!
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/27/2013 3:47:00 AM
Thank you Drake its an honor for novice like me to get my name among those names
Date: 6/25/2013 12:14:00 AM
wow, you really got inspired by that contest. REALLY nice!
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/25/2013 1:50:00 AM
Thank you Andrea :)
Date: 6/24/2013 7:32:00 AM
this should do well gl in contest TFS enjoyed it Shadow x smiles
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 1:09:00 PM
Thank you Shadow
Date: 6/24/2013 6:41:00 AM
What a beautiful place you have though up. I think it is a winner no matter what my friend. ~ Debbie K.
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 1:09:00 PM
Thank you for your beautiful words :)
Date: 6/24/2013 2:43:00 AM
I see this as a winning piece n i hope i'm right. very beautifully written and so serene.
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Sasha glad that you liked it :-)
Date: 6/24/2013 12:58:00 AM
nicely done, though my fav is last stanza ,,, sliding on morning dews ;}
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 5:59:00 AM
Thank you Debbie :-)
Date: 6/23/2013 9:57:00 PM
one more thing, thank you for supporting my recent contest. and adding your poems on this site. you've made a new fan out of me. have yourself a good one. adding you on my favorite list again. haha, and I say again. Cuz , you're already on my favorite list. hugs *SKAT*
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 5:57:00 AM
Oh thanks a lot for your kind words.
Date: 6/23/2013 9:54:00 PM
a perfect 7 poem. Shiraz, beautiful, and one of the best poems I've read all day today. the imagery is excellent. *SKAT*
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Date: 6/23/2013 9:03:00 PM
Hello Shiraz, i love the world the world above the clouds. I wish to feel the sun rays kiss my skin with delight and a cold misty air. your poem is wonderful, thank you for having me fall in love with the imagery of a life offered in paradise. were all is allowed. good luck in the contest, my sweet friend * LUV * LINDA
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 5:58:00 AM
Thank you for dropping by Linda glad that you liked it
Date: 6/23/2013 8:53:00 PM
I feel sure this will be ranked... Might even win.... Good luck on a fabulous entry... Jake
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/24/2013 5:53:00 AM
Thank you sir
Date: 6/23/2013 8:41:00 AM
very beautifully written and all the best for the contest.
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Shiraz Iqbal
Date: 6/23/2013 9:01:00 AM
Thanks Kenisha

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