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Works of Time

Conceived by a solitary mind. Fulfillment takes, life, blood, sweat, tears given by so many. But still the sacrifice of so many, does not secure the future. For the onslaught of nature, unlike man is relentless. And unlike man, nature has time, all the time in the universe. A moment in time, are the works of man... © Alexis C Pond.

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Ayesha Karim

Date: 7/11/2013 10:35:00 AM

Your poem is so simple to understand and your poem's message is so true.

Peter Dorr

Date: 6/30/2013 11:39:00 AM

True? We may know one day! Churchill's great speech 'blood, sweat and tears' apparently similar to another defender of freedom speech - Garibaldi's.

Alexis Pond
Date: 6/30/2013 3:41:00 PM

Thanks Peter, for stopping by and commenting on my poem, I hope you enjoyed the read. Cheers Alexis

Poet Tacito

Date: 6/30/2013 6:35:00 AM

Many deep messages here. A lot of hidden, layered truth to this distinct piece. Very nice work!

Alexis Pond
Date: 6/30/2013 6:47:00 AM

Hello there Drake, Thanks for reading and commenting its much appreciated. I do try to simulate the old gray matter.