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Working Overtime



Asbestos I can tell,
my lungs are working hard as
a sump pump in a clogged well
Though the cancer infiltration rate is currently low,
my body count white cell ineffectiveness is bound to grow
Asbestos I can tell,
my future breathing capacity
don’t look so well
Got my lungs working overtime
in this here deep underground coal mine
Down below, it’s dark and damp ... 
a claustrophobic cancerous shroud
is starting to dim my survival lamp
A persistent bout of black seam consumption
is constantly keeping me sick
Just about right now,
I really could use another cancer stick
Although, I know my lungs
are working overtime as it is ... even still
Asbestos I can tell,
Death is gonna have a few job openings
now the road at the textile mill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/28/2017 6:15:00 PM
A great depiction of working with very bad conditions Freddie...maybe we should spread your great poem over some work places lol...god bless my friend...^WW^
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Date: 8/28/2017 3:14:00 PM
Superb!
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