Words Tumbling

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Canadian Liberation Tulip Garden - LocoMotoArt

days of my childhood tumbling by ~ ~ in my memories feeding ducks in a lush green park spring tulips in all hues and shapes I pick some to give to mother lady shouts those are my tulips I run home fall and scrap my knee tears falling . . . mother held me close ~ I grow up fall into blue eyes of a man who leaves me breathless I marry we will have a child so happy but the baby dies tears falling . . . mother held me close ~ my true love now gone far above engraved stone mother held me close ~ tears falling . . . _____________________ April 10, 2021 Poetry/Anacreontic Verse/Words Tumbling Copyright Protected, ID 04-1346-207-10 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Anacreontic Verse sponsor, Silent One, Judged 07/28/2021 First Place

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Alexis Y.

Date: 7/29/2021 2:30:00 PM

WoW! BW, You've penned an excellent entry for the contest. I found it to be beautiful and sad at the same time. Congratulations on your 1st place win. It was well deserved. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Constance La France
Date: 7/29/2021 4:01:00 PM

Alexis, thanks for the compliment, the nice comment and the congratulations ~ love and serenity _Constance

Silent One

Date: 7/29/2021 6:44:00 AM

Sorry, I've not been around.. Not much free time at the moment, and that means not enough time for Poetry Soup... Thank you for writing for my contest and apologies it took so long to judge.. Congratulations on your placement...

Constance La France
Date: 7/29/2021 7:03:00 AM

Silent, thank you for the inspiration and the contest and for my great placement, I have missed you but understand that life happens ~ peace and tranquility _Constance