Words of Sweet Love

She whispers words of sweet love.
Those penetrate my core and being,
Sending me into a euphoric state
That lasts what seems a lifetime.

Each word, dances fervently within me
Taking its life source from me
And living on its own, within my mind.

My heart, the words permeate and linger
Allowing just enough room for love to grow.
Letting me breathe, one gasp at a time

She whispers words of sweet love.
Those penetrate my core and being,
Sending me into a euphoric state
That lasts what seems a lifetime.

From my head to my toes, tingling excitement
An explosion of the senses, lasting eternal
Allowing my reaction of exhilaration.

She is within me, wanting, desiring, breathing
A physical captive, trapped on another plain
It is her spiritual being that controls me.

She whispers words of sweet love.
Those penetrate my core and being,
Sending me into a euphoric state
That lasts what seems a lifetime.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Susan Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 8:31 AM
I like what you've written, however, I don't think you need to repeat the same stanza 2 more times. I don't think it adds anything to the poem; it just seems disruptive to me. Think about it. Do you really need them? (Just my 2 cents)
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