Words of Loveless

I hold my breath, feeling the blade pierce my chest
Letting out a muffled cry from my blood red lips
Whimpers of pain echo about this dark damp room
Blood runs down my breasts like small trickling streams
I fall to my shaky knees, crying blood of hurt

Your words are a blade, killing my heart
The burning betrayal of your loving lyrics
Just finish me off, throw me into oblivion 
If I've lost you, I've lost all purpose
You were my blood, keeping me alive

I wrap my unstable fingers around the steel hilt
Pulling, I cry out pathetically, fighting death
Your words shallow into meaningless turmoil 
Did you only mean to hurt me? Kill me?
'I hate you' is as if saying to me 'Die'
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
November 19, 2008 at 5:57 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Jordan Avatar
November 18, 2008 at 1:45 PM
Christine this is truly one of the most emotional poems i have read - congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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November 17, 2008 at 9:15 AM
Congatulations Christine on "Words of Loveless" being featured. Vince
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November 17, 2008 at 6:18 AM
A powerful poem! Congratulations on being featured this week. Well deserved!~Carrie
George   Avatar
November 17, 2008 at 3:51 AM
Very dramatic, powerful and emotional words, dear christine. Congratulations on this feature of the week. Lainie
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