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Words Left Unsaid

The tears in your eyes say you are leaving The deserts around us sigh as we part Words left unsaid won't stop me from grieving And searching for answers for this poor heart I will remember the light of your smile And the tenderness of holding you tight The soft words spoken in such a short while As we laughed and loved beneath the moonlight Does the moon still shine and the coyotes cry In the magical place we knew so well Are there still embers that say we should try Or should we just let our memories tell I can always recall how the stars shined - Should I remember or leave them behind ? 2/26/2017

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Date: 8/11/2017 11:44:00 AM
Amazing sonnet, Larry. Unsaid really speaks through it. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 8/5/2017 11:14:00 PM
What a gorgeous sonnet, Larry, and an exquisitely-woven poem of lost love and melancholy! Adore this - congrats on your win! :-)
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Date: 8/5/2017 4:00:00 PM
Hi Larry, a tender and moving poem. Congrats on your placement!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/5/2017 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Susan!..Larry
Date: 8/4/2017 2:58:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet Larry! Congratulations on your placement! : )
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/5/2017 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Connie
Date: 8/4/2017 12:23:00 PM
Really nice sonnet Larry, you always seem to appear on my winners list, I guess you know what I like, and I like this one! Congrats on a fine placement in this tough contest!
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/5/2017 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, John. My pleasure to be on your list of placements. Larry
Date: 3/30/2017 11:26:00 AM
Larry, there is no forgetting. A lovely sonnet.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 8/5/2017 10:21:00 PM
Thank you, James!
Date: 3/28/2017 5:10:00 PM
Really nice sonnet Larry, enjoyed it very much! Sad sentiment, hope it is fiction.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/28/2017 10:30:00 PM
Thanks, John. Thankfully it's fiction!!...Larry
Date: 3/18/2017 4:24:00 PM
Amazingly penned!!!!! Just beautiful :)
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/28/2017 10:29:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 3/6/2017 10:47:00 AM
This is wonderful. you have once again produced another masterpiece which is a true testament of your reputation in this wonderful community. Thanks a lot for the share.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 3/6/2017 11:09:00 PM
Thank you for your generous remarks. They are much appreciated..Larry

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