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Words Echo From the Top

They turned their lives into a façade To keep fooling those on the outside Sadly, choosing to live such a lie As if this would erase everything The mountain still sits for all to see Who open their eyes and choose to hear The words, as they echo from the top Heidi Sands 8/6/17

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Date: 8/6/2017 11:35:00 AM
I really enjoyed your blank verse, very well done! You got it just right! What a magnificent poem, Great Work!!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thank you so much Russell :) I appreciate your support .
Date: 8/6/2017 9:42:00 AM
Nice pen :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Maureen :)
Date: 8/6/2017 8:36:00 AM
Hello Heidi. This is short, sweet and right to the punch. I like it.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 8/6/2017 9:45:00 AM
Thank you Bette :)

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