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Words Became Art

~*~ Words became art fractur'd phrasings ‘pon parchment glass slippers darkly dancing when she wielded her pen posy paint'd notions on butterfly wings taking our minds a'whirling senses midst mesmeric illusions dizzying zephyr’d vistas 'neath arbor'd enchantment hot cuppa whispers whilst inky stanzas of creative breaths exhale’d poetry Written in the style of a very dear poetic friend from my past who I greatly admired

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Sunlite Wanter

Date: 9/6/2019 10:24:00 AM

I like your style better, Chris, but this is very enjoyable.

Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 10:52:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend.

Hello There

Date: 9/5/2019 11:01:00 PM

I really enjoyed this creative piece and form. No wasted words or breath here.

Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you so much. I am happy you liked it

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 9/5/2019 9:49:00 PM

Beautiful~ x

Chris Green
Date: 9/6/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Sandra Adams

Date: 9/5/2019 5:19:00 PM

what a beautiful poem in your friends honor, i am sure she is smiling down upon you and your creative pen probably reading your wonderful roads from afar! Gorgeous poem Chris :) hugs

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 5:24:00 PM

Thank you so very much Sandy. I think you would have really enjoyed her poetry. I appreciate all of the kindness you show me. You are a good friend.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/5/2019 4:56:00 PM

a creative tribute, chris! i love the idea of you capturing someone else's style in a lovely homage to her...

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 5:06:00 PM

Thanks so much Ilene. I always admired her work, I was a big fan. I miss reading her. I appreciate your visit today

Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/5/2019 4:03:00 PM

And once more you do inspire! This was beautiful your way with words will always amaze me chris! And your muse must be something! Or the style anyway regardless I love this!;)

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 4:23:00 PM

Thank you so much Brenda. I am always thankful for your wonderful comment on my poetry. I appreciate you.

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/5/2019 3:10:00 PM

Beautiful. I felt like I took a creative ride with this one :)

Chris Green
Date: 9/5/2019 3:12:00 PM

Thank you Heidi. I hope it didn't make you dizzy. : )