Words

Morning tea is dark
Like the night behind our house
Where the sun lost its way
And the air did not stop to greet our trees.

We gaze at our place where we sat last night
we know 
we'll leave everything behind us
And won't collect the scattered words between the chairs.

Night was long
The candle is dusty and cold like our fingers
Why do we wait for tomorrow
If only to throw our words like pieces of papers 
on the table and leave?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 8/23/2020 3:58:00 AM
Morning tea is dark, like the night behind our house! Brilliant! Yes. I have genuinely enjoyed your poetry! You write with a purity that most don’t have!!
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Date: 2/25/2018 4:50:00 AM
i also love your wordage .especially this line "Where the sun lost its way And the air did not stop to greet our trees." but i could not understand last stanza, if you can explain please
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 2/25/2018 10:35:00 AM
Thank you:)) In the last two lines is the answer. Why do we wait for tomorrow if we only use few words, while we sit to talk and then just leave?
Date: 9/16/2017 6:22:00 PM
I love your wordage here! No pun intended.
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/16/2017 11:44:00 PM
Thank you:)
Date: 9/9/2017 11:25:00 PM
Very nice :)
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/16/2017 11:44:00 PM
Thanks Debbie::)
Date: 9/2/2017 8:20:00 PM
Love your style. Easy to slip into your skin.
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/8/2017 4:26:00 AM
Thank you Line:)) K.
Date: 9/2/2017 6:29:00 AM
I spend much time on our veranda, day and night, it is reflected in a lot of my poetry. It a place where dreams are made and sometimes realised. Lovely write Khalid. God Bless. D.
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/8/2017 4:27:00 AM
God bless you too Dave:)) K.
Date: 9/1/2017 2:20:00 AM
Well written...Really enjoyed the imagery.
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/1/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thank you Afroza, :)
Date: 8/31/2017 2:45:00 PM
I like this line: "And the air did not stop to greet our trees" Good one, Khalid!
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 9/1/2017 10:26:00 AM
Thanks, :))
Date: 8/15/2017 8:59:00 PM
Well this is different, i like this poem you wrote.Well Inow know rg
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Khalid Albudoor
Date: 8/31/2017 12:45:00 PM
Thank you Darlene :)
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