Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Wordplay Or How To Rack Your Brain

 Just a poem, not life. 

Sea's waves roll in and out rhythmically
See a change, now its arrhythmically

Tsunami must be the blame or
Tommy's sleeping open-mouth snore

Amassed tangible wealth did he
A missed taking care of health, you see

Tsunami life lived now explodes
Tommy's health suddenly implodes

     

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Howard Kerr March 9, 2025 at 5:15 AM Sara, Thanks for your reflections on Baltimore Oriole. Your “Wordplay” poem makes judicious use of extremely clever rhymes. Ingenious imagery and storyline a bonus. Congrats on selection Howard Sara Kendrick March 9, 2025 at 8:10 AM Howard, it was not so easy to write. Thank you for the congrats.

Mark Toney December 29, 2024 at 5:45 AM Hi, Sara. Congratulations on your win. The title nicely sets up the poem. Love the wordplay and sea waves/tsunami metaphor. “Just a poem, not life.” :) Sara Kendrick December 29, 2024 at 7:45 AM Mark, your visit with congrats and a nice review is very encouraging. Sara K

Maclawrence Famuyiwa December 29, 2024 at 5:22 AM Congratulations on your win. Nice poem with alluring lyrics and scenic scenery. Sara Kendrick December 29, 2024 at 7:44 AM Thank you, MaClawrence. I appreciate visit with congrats. Sara K

Gershon Wolf December 24, 2024 at 7:39 PM Poor 'Tsunami Tommy!' Thanks for the chuckle, Sara! Season's best, Gershon Sara Kendrick December 25, 2024 at 3:05 AM I figured you would like the humor, Gershon. Thanks for the visit. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2024 at 10:06 AM well,I think I saw that you made the top ten. So way to go, Sara. Congratulations. Sara Kendrick December 24, 2024 at 1:22 PM Thank you, Andrea. I appreciate the revisiting of my work. Sara K

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh December 22, 2024 at 9:45 PM Tsunami and health crisis,a nice metaphor.Enjoyed reading the poem. Sara Kendrick December 23, 2024 at 3:07 AM Why, thank you, Akham. I appreciate the visit and kind review of my work. Sara K

Andrea Dietrich December 22, 2024 at 2:59 PM Cool one, Sara. If for Brian, I am wondering if you changed all the words correctly. Sara Kendrick December 22, 2024 at 4:12 PM Andrea, I am sure it is not what Brian expected but I had fun trying it. Thanks for the kind review. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith December 20, 2024 at 12:33 PM What a write/picture you have here. I enjoyed both.... Have a great day.......... Sara Kendrick December 20, 2024 at 12:51 PM Thank you, Paula. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K