Nigel Fawcett Poet Free verse

Word Morph – Cold To Warm

until our worlds collided my body was COLD
my life before you was bound in black CORD
like the colour of my cave and the mood of my WORD
now, your love brings me light, your soul is my WARD
your breath gives me strength, and your heart keeps me WARM



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Mc Mc January 6, 2009 at 6:12 AM HOW INTERESTING! EXCELLENT AND THANKS FOR YOUR COMMENTS, NIGEL!!

John Loving Iii January 5, 2009 at 11:33 AM you may have a new form of poetry. all it needs is a name; and i can see soupers giving it a try. john

Daver Austin January 5, 2009 at 7:59 AM This is an intriguing form, short and revealing. Thanks for your congrats. Love, daver

Robin L. Gass January 4, 2009 at 9:16 PM This is great, Nigel. I agree with Sharon. Awesome job. The challenge was different (and fun). Can't wait to see everyones, as they post! This should be interesting! GBY. Love, Robin

Derrick Burton January 4, 2009 at 2:04 PM Nice flow of words that flowed very well as i read. thought they were the same word at, this is unique. Thank you again for the great comment on my poem, BABYS....

Carrie Richards January 4, 2009 at 8:26 AM Like it has been said before...thank you for another challenge. It will not be an easy one, but my fellow soupers always astound me with their creative juices....your poem here is an example of that! ~ Love, Carrie

Sharon Winter January 4, 2009 at 7:23 AM Nigel, how did you write such a beautiful poem sticking to this challenge??? I have never done anything like this before. It is indeed unique and no doubt will be very difficult. Thanks for stretching our brains (if I am even able!). Love, Shar

Michael Jordan January 4, 2009 at 6:22 AM Nigel - I will certainly do that - Exactly the case between my wife and I - great sentiments within this poem - God Bless, MJ

Nigel Fawcett January 4, 2009 at 4:20 AM Hi Kristin, and sorry for confusing you. Yes, you write it like this one. Hope you enjoy the challenge!

Kristin Reynolds January 4, 2009 at 4:13 AM I must admit, that I am confused! lol excuse my thickness, but, when writing the form, do you just use the four letter words, or write a poem with the words at the end of each line, like this one? Help! Thanks, Nigel! This looks like quite the challenge! Kristin

Raul Moreno January 4, 2009 at 3:10 AM Great poem Nigel, the depth of love is an abyss. I too have many loves but writing is one of my greatest. Best of luck in 2009...Raul