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Word Morph - Coal To Gold

When you first stumbled upon me my soul was dull like coal You never gave up and kept sight of your majestic goal Dumb as a lamb yet humble enough to be led by your goad Your hard work refined my soul and made it shine like gold

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Brian Strand

Date: 1/25/2009 1:00:00 AM

Thank Monique for your kind words.Lik ythe imagery in this one especially L4.Rgds Brian

Chamonique Knowles

Date: 1/24/2009 10:36:00 PM

wow nice job, this is not a easy type of poem to write, i tried. but u did it realy well, nice job.... Livyyy

Sean Kelly

Date: 1/15/2009 1:45:00 PM

Monique , well " Morphed " , in a great sequence . This type is not easy , but you've done very well .... Now , if you can make this happen ; WOW !!! ....