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Word morph -- Tide to wave

TIDE to WAVE The coming dawn brings the TIDE Across the shore, it spread so WIDE Inward slowly, I start to WADE It carries me in, with its WAVE Author's note: This is just a try don't know if it's done right..lol....Maryam

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Date: 1/14/2009 1:48:00 PM
Wow you did this so nice and easy Maryam! I can't seem to get a handle on one. grumble Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 1/14/2009 1:16:00 PM
Awesome!!!! You did an excellent job, Maryam. I hope you enter. A contender for sure! I love the content as well as the form. Love, Robin
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Date: 1/14/2009 2:46:00 AM
Seems like perfect to me. Nicely said. Love, Chitra
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Date: 1/13/2009 5:50:00 PM
Great word morph , i didn't know about it till now.
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Date: 1/13/2009 4:48:00 PM
Looks like you did it fine! It is not easy, that's for sure! Good job! Love, Shar
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Date: 1/13/2009 2:32:00 PM
yes you did it right! give that lady a prize. JHL
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Date: 1/13/2009 2:28:00 PM
I like it Maryam, I think it's really well done, but then again I never have been very god at word morphs. haha Lots of love ~Jen~
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Date: 1/13/2009 2:12:00 PM
Looks perfect to me!! Good job! ~ Carrie
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