WORD FLOW

 There was a time when she would delight to write
 Words won't chime her muse did choose to leave
 Her prime concern,  to learn when  words will flow just right

 In muddled grime her mind can't find a verse
 A dime might buy a vowel, but right now she'll grieve
 She has no rhyme  things are blurred and to a word she's averse

 It's downtime,  she'll wait late for her muse to return
 Meantime the choice, to await her poetic voice, then weave
 her words, at bedtime her muse appears, cheers, words now churn
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There was a time when she would delight to write
 Words won't chime her muse did choose to leave
 Her prime concern,  to learn when  words will flow just right

What's worse, her mind can't find a verse
No need to disperse vowels in flight,  right now she'll grieve
  No rhymes to intersperse, word, blurred, and to write she's averse

 It's downtime,  she'll wait late for her muse to return
 She'll choose, to await poetic voice, her choice, then weave
 her words, no more blues, her muse appears, cheers, words now churn
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Date: 9/13/2024 6:58:00 PM
When the time is right, words she will write. (I can relate). So clever, Joseph. This seems a bit of a challenge to create, but you've mastered it. Well done, my dear friend. Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 9/9/2024 12:36:00 AM
A clever poem. Well written.
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Date: 9/3/2024 1:05:00 PM
You took it all the way to the third line. I finished my set the other day but never did the rhyme from line two to three. Great flow with your word flow poem, Joseph.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/3/2024 1:23:00 PM
Doing the same rhyme across lines isn't easy Thanks Andrea
Date: 9/1/2024 9:49:00 PM
So ! Fluent Flow on internal rhyming. Sure to try. Internal rhyming is my most favourite. Have Good Days.
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Joseph May
Date: 9/3/2024 1:21:00 PM
Thanks Anisha
Date: 8/30/2024 11:30:00 AM
Hello Joe, I love your word flow and it looks like you have mastered this style. - Blessings, My Friend, Daniel
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Joseph May
Date: 8/30/2024 12:37:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, Blessings
Date: 8/29/2024 10:06:00 PM
You're brilliant at this Joseph, you make it look so easy. Tom
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Joseph May
Date: 8/30/2024 6:04:00 AM
Thanks Tom, it's hard keeping track of all the rhymes
Date: 8/29/2024 1:26:00 PM
Hey, better late than never, though she may want to impose a fine for the late arrival
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Joseph May
Date: 8/29/2024 3:58:00 PM
Haha, A hefty fine would fit the bill
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