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I thought I would give this challenge a try. I know it may not have a good a flow nor make sense. Using all of these words were definitely a challenge because we don't use all these words at once. Anyway I enjoyed the challenge: -) Alexis
Why have we ran from morality By living in such brutality We’ve lost touch with our humanity And soon we will lose our vitality By embracing a hateful mentality Living like this is a definite fatality Our lifestyles have become a mundanity No longer a positive force in our urbanity And that alone is not a formality We’re wayward souls, and that's a reality Our words are often vile profanity The things we say are inanity, And the end result we always be a volcanity Not to mention living this way is pure insanity Insanity Humanity profanity Inanity Mundanity Urbanity Fatality Reality Brutality Formality Mentality Morality Vitality Volcanity 1-24-17 Contest- Word Challenge Sponsor- Silent One

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Date: 1/26/2017 1:55:00 PM
alexis, words worth pondering about; lovely piece..huggs
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Date: 1/26/2017 9:02:00 AM
Well expressed and well done Alexis~good luck in the contest! Hugs~Che
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Date: 1/25/2017 6:21:00 AM
This poem is one of the few best entries for this contest, I have read so far. The words are brilliantly used.
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Date: 1/24/2017 5:34:00 PM
A righteous write, Alexis. It made absolute sense. I thought you even handled the one word that trips up a lot of people ... urbanity. Very creative structure this poem is. Kudos to you. A 7 for sheer moxie to even do a poem like this. Love and peace to you.
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Date: 1/24/2017 10:11:00 AM
What do you mean not make sense, this made perfect sense to me and is one of the best I have read so far using the words provided. Great job Alexis, and good luck in the contest though I don't think you will need any luck, this looks like a winner to me.
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Date: 1/24/2017 9:22:00 AM
Well, I think you have done a wonderful poem here! And I can imagine it was a challenge! Well done, Alexis /|\
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Date: 1/24/2017 9:12:00 AM
Very Well done with this challenge Alexis. Good luck with the contest :)
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