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Poetic Form: Alexandrine

Inspired: 2023 October 10

Image: Is It Beneficial? by BecomingMinimalist

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

Word By Mom, Me a Bit

In the beginning ...," roosts; 
            Christians and Jewish boosts.



                     Hubs stretched out their ellipsed
              rung, un-Earth cures eclipsed
       space; science clues darkling,
emerging as sparkling.



Up and down, primordial
           chains--retards cordial.
                 Time slot checking briefly
                          when brain cells claim chiefly.



       Focused an analyst
         review a panelist,
     truth and not devious;
   now, post-, and previous.

                                                 Be of good health, nourish,
                                                    mindful, and to flourish
                                                    together ... we harness
                                                our outreached true farness.

   Constants are the scatheful,
     equaled by the faithful ...
  life marks trails that puncture
     time cross-over juncture.



                                                                     Naysayers, "That's crackpot!"
                                Truth smiles at the jackpot
              as hopes, a bit mournful
              of those fiercely scornful



   Truth be told--mortified,
      unseat those fortified,
         advent-relegating
            actions delegating,
               doting are distinguished
                  evil hailed extinguished,
                     sage passage dutiful,
                        heart imparts beautiful.

                                                Gauging your fealty
                                             accents self-realty ...
                                          descension diminished;
                                       exalted goals finished.

                                    Daily scriptures strengthen,
                                 understanding lengthen
                              all regenerated
                           by the venerated.



   A righteous behavior,
      prophets teach, a savior ...
         of a lost lamb was--not,
            for The Shepherd does--not,
               hence, Heaven will cherish,
                  hell reroutes won't perish,
                     reborn renews brilliance,
                        transforming resilience.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fowler Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 3:20 PM
What a wonderful message and rhythmic rhyming! hugs :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
October 11, 2023 at 4:02 PM
A pleasant occasion, Linda, appreciated with Aloha, William
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