Eve Roper Poet Monorhyme

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Monorhyme Form


Jeremy, a teen, is baby sitting
his siblings. They swallow him up playing.
 Berry sits on big brothers lap giggling
in the big comfy chair sinking feeling,
while tightly squeezing, Ella’s enjoying.
Admiration of big brother’s loving.

Frankie and Joey, watching, role-playing,
Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles winning.
Michelangelo’s,   stealth bomber punching,
Donatello’s, Chi Gong skill in slamming,
Leonardo’s master swordsman slashing.
Ninjutsu skills, arms swinging, feet kicking
Following every skilled move they’re making.

Heartbeat of siblings bonding, like breathing.
Big brother is always encouraging,
Never giving up on our life squabbling,
protective, understanding, still willing
to play, do fun things, smiling, ensuring.

5/25/2016


5/25/2016



Poetry Contest ; Personal Memories Monorhyme II - 

 Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Space Cadet September 27, 2016 at 1:53 AM Wow. Breathtaking. w

Just James July 14, 2016 at 8:56 AM Brilliant work plus perfect meter!

Sunita U.D Palawon June 18, 2016 at 12:31 PM Congrats. Nice monorhyme and very creative. :)

Andrea Dietrich June 18, 2016 at 10:03 AM fantastic and well deserved win. BIG congrats, Eve.

Joanna Daniel June 18, 2016 at 4:21 AM Back to congratulate you on your wonderful first place win:) Well done, Eve:)

Charlie Smith June 16, 2016 at 8:12 PM Congratulations Eve, wonderful win...

Jan Allison June 16, 2016 at 5:31 PM I knew it would be a winner:-) many congrats Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues June 16, 2016 at 4:21 PM So much action, Eve! Love the line: heartbeat of siblings bonding, like breathing. Congratulations!

Connie Marcum Wong June 16, 2016 at 3:57 PM I LOVE THIS Eve! I am so happy to see it in first place where it belongs! The picture is precious! Congratulations! #7 ; )

Bl Devnath June 16, 2016 at 10:22 AM Sorry i missed this wonderful poem to read. It's really an enjoyable poem. A great congrats on your superb win and a beautiful 7 my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl

Beautiful Scars June 16, 2016 at 7:57 AM Eve, I loved this of course! Congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest! :)-luloo Beautiful Scars June 16, 2016 at 10:38 AM you're very welcome Eve :)-luloo Eve Roper June 16, 2016 at 8:36 AM Wow!! I'm honored, Laura, thank you :-) Hugs

Sandra Haight June 16, 2016 at 7:46 AM Hi, Eve, I am back again to give you my heartfelt congratulations on your First Place Trophy win in Laura's Premiere contest! Well done! 7 Hugs, Sandra

Nette Onclaud May 29, 2016 at 3:03 PM remarkable work; i'm joining in the fun, eve..huggs

Richard Lamoureux May 29, 2016 at 10:12 AM Great use of the form. A happy picture you have painted with your words Eve.

Arthur Vaso May 29, 2016 at 12:22 AM Your poem is as amazing as the photo! Loved this Eve! Eve Roper May 29, 2016 at 9:37 AM Thank you, Arthur :-)

Joyce Johnson May 28, 2016 at 9:25 PM What loving siblings. I like their attitude. Thank you for reading and commenting on my win. Love, Joyce Eve Roper May 29, 2016 at 9:38 AM Thank you, Joyce,your poem was beautiful :-)

Gordon Mcconnell May 28, 2016 at 1:06 PM Such a lovely piece Eve, smashing rhyme and flow, a real enjoyable piece! Eve Roper May 29, 2016 at 9:41 AM Thank you, Gordon, for your complement :-)

Andrea Dietrich May 27, 2016 at 8:32 PM Eve, this is so awesome how you named them all. Do you actually know their names or did you make them up? GREAT job. Eve Roper May 29, 2016 at 9:45 AM Thank you, Andrea, I knew their names. I was going to write it with no names , but it was meaningful :-)

Paul Callus May 26, 2016 at 12:26 PM Looks like you had fun writing this poem in monorhyme form, Eve, and the children are having a great time, too! gl for the contest. Hugs // paul Eve Roper May 29, 2016 at 9:48 AM Thank you, Paul, brought back memories of my youngest roll playing having fun :-)

Becca Teagan May 26, 2016 at 8:57 AM It's so neat when siblings all get along ... and enjoy each other. It sure looks like that in the pic, and I love how you described it in your poem. Very nice, Eve. Eve Roper May 26, 2016 at 9:40 AM Thank you, Becca, this was a little difficult to write having to keep it in a 10 syllables and rhymes :-)

Ravi Sathasivam May 26, 2016 at 8:47 AM Excellent. Well described with great rhyming. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it

Demetrios Trifiatis May 26, 2016 at 5:10 AM What a joy to read! What happiness to see it live! Wonderful dear, Eve!

Joanna Daniel May 26, 2016 at 4:40 AM The whole picture beautifully described:) Great write Eve:) Eve Roper May 29, 2016 at 9:37 AM Thank you, Jo :-)

Jan Allison May 26, 2016 at 1:17 AM what a charming interpretation of the photo - good luck in the contest Eve:-) hugs Jan xx Eve Roper May 29, 2016 at 9:36 AM Thank you, Jan, :-)

Sandra Haight May 25, 2016 at 8:23 PM Lots of action and description here, Eve, with great rhyming! It reads like the 'whirlwind' the kids display in the photo! Laura will love it! Hugs, Sandra Eve Roper May 29, 2016 at 9:35 AM Thank you, Sandra :-)