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Wooly

Why do you try to pull the wool over my eyes?
Others can see your own hypocrisy 
Often telling blatant lies 
Life is for living, 
You need to get a life!

Contest:WOOL
Sponsor:C T

12~30~15

Copyright © Jan Allison | Year Posted 2015

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/30/2016 11:48:00 PM thank you for the hugs Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 1/29/2016 8:20:00 PM Jan, congrats on your WOOLISH win. XOX -LINDA- Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/30/2016 6:13:00 AM Thanks Linda:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/24/2016 3:27:00 PM congrats, Jan. You did super well in this contest. And sorry about you know who. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/24/2016 3:28:00 PM Maybe they should read it lol :-) hugs jan xx

Skat A Date: 1/21/2016 12:15:00 PM Jan, Congrats on your Wooly wool win. Love **SKAT** Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2016 7:30:00 AM Thanks Skat:-) Hugs Jan xx

James Inman Date: 1/21/2016 10:25:00 AM Enjoyed your wonderful acrostic, Jan. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2016 7:30:00 AM Thanks James:-) Hugs Jan xx

Joseph May Date: 1/21/2016 7:08:00 AM Very nice 5 line acrostic Jan...Congrats on your win Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2016 7:29:00 AM Thanks Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 1/21/2016 12:40:00 AM Sorry Jan.. done awesome in this form.. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2016 7:28:00 AM Thanks Dr Sharma:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 1/21/2016 12:39:00 AM How lovely Sandra.. doing pretty well with this form u seem having mastered.. big congrats!! Login to Reply

Dan Cwiak Date: 1/21/2016 12:05:00 AM Great use of the Acrostic Form, Jan. Congrats on your win. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2016 7:28:00 AM Thanks Dan:-) Hugs Jan xx

C T Date: 1/20/2016 11:21:00 PM thank you Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2016 7:28:00 AM Thanks for a great contest C TI was delighted to place so well:-) hugs Jan xx

Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 1/4/2016 3:40:00 PM WOOLY indeed! Well done Jan... your text saya it all! Best wishes, Keith Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 1/4/2016 3:42:00 PM Sadly Keith we all have been betrayed by someone in our lives - this is autobiographical for me:-( hugs Jan xx Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 1/4/2016 3:40:00 PM Whoops! says

Maurice Yvonne Date: 12/31/2015 5:11:00 PM Do you remember that old song from one of those old movies "Sisters". No reason. I just thought I would ask. Now about your poem. Great take on the contest. This one is sublime. A Fav! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/31/2015 5:12:00 PM LOL yes I know it sadly the words don't fit anymore lol:-) hugs Jan xx

James Fraser Date: 12/31/2015 2:28:00 PM A message that the wise will absorb, but to some your words will leak from their brains ~~ clever piece Jan ~~ hugs ~~ James xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/31/2015 5:10:00 PM Yes sadly the message just hasn't sunk in with her James:-( hugs Jan xx

CayCay Jennings Date: 12/31/2015 12:29:00 AM I must read about this contest - don't know the theme, but I know this write is a straight forward punch! Good luck ... CayCay Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/31/2015 3:58:00 AM Thanks CayCay the theme is wool I just go with the flow but my emotions spilled out with this one:-( hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/30/2015 6:43:00 PM Jan, I think this fits quite nicely with the wool theme, and I can think of a few people we both know that would fit this description. Good one! Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 6:44:00 PM Sadly Andrea this is about a family member - you know who I'm talking about:-( :-( :-( hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper Date: 12/30/2015 5:46:00 PM I love your Poem " Wooly" !!!! :) Hugs sweet friend and have a very safe and Happy New Year's Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 5:49:00 PM Thanks Eve sometimes the emotions come spilling out am so glad I have an outlet for my feelings in my poetry:-) hugs jan xx

Tim Smith Date: 12/30/2015 4:18:00 PM The are wolves in sheep's clothing Jan...Have a happy and healthy New Year Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 4:24:00 PM Sure are Tim - I did a poem about that earlier in the year! :-( hugs jan xx

Paul Callus Date: 12/30/2015 2:19:00 PM A powerful mini slam, dear Jan! Don't let it get to you! Hugs ~ paul Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 2:20:00 PM I know family wise 2016 is going to be difficult Paul, but having the ability to put my thoughts onto paper is very therapeutic:-) hugs Jan xx

Carlton Dean Morris Date: 12/30/2015 1:54:00 PM Love this ink very much Login to Reply Carlton Dean Morris Date: 1/2/2016 4:11:00 AM Oh yes writing and expressing oneself in words can be amazing JAN ALLISON, Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 1:59:00 PM Thanks Carlton sometimes you simply have to put your frustrations out into words I never dreamed writing would be so cathartic :-) hugs Jan xx

Poet Destroyer A Date: 12/30/2015 12:16:00 PM ha, you are awesome. LOL... Jan, really I love the message ... Happy New Years... Always ~LINDA~ Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 12:26:00 PM Thanks Linda I am able to express my emotions through my poetry - not sure Chase will see it as being apt for the 'wool' theme but I have to go with the flow of my pen and beleive me it was good to write this one:-) hugs Jan xx

Kelli White Date: 12/30/2015 12:04:00 PM I used to have a cat named Wooly. Wow I never thought of his name like this. Sorry. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 12:12:00 PM This is about a member of my family Kelli:-( hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/30/2015 11:24:00 AM ohhh, a wolie wolfie in sheep's clothing.. awwright, jan; so apt!..huggs Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 12:12:00 PM I have hidden a lot of what is going on in my personal life Nette - but sometimes it spills out into my poems :-( :-( hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian Date: 12/30/2015 9:24:00 AM Great write, sweetie....It's just sad that some people tell lies....or twist the truth. Hugs, sweetie. Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 12:10:00 PM It has been such a tough year for me on an emotional level Eileen and to be betrayed as I have done is hard to live with:-( hugs jan xx

Bl Devnath Date: 12/30/2015 8:15:00 AM A Philosophical poem read from you. Very deeply penned. Good luck in the contest. Loved always my lovely friend,bl Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/30/2015 8:17:00 AM I went for a different take on the wool theme but sadly this is written from the heart:-( hugs Jan xx