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Woodland Brook

Soft at first, the melody grows louder as I near The carefree brook skips through the wood Singing to herself, laughing at her song Warmed by the sun whose golden fingers Dance upon the surface, and caress the ripples She meanders aimlessly, exploring, embracing I am taken by the silence that surrounds me No sound save the waters lullaby Her symphony floating lightly o'er the glen I bask in the peaceful essence of the moment Nature, christened in her flowered gown Applauds the melodic serenade
11/15,2011

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Date: 12/15/2011 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry Jon
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/15/2011 10:15:00 PM
Thank you Jon
Date: 12/15/2011 10:59:00 AM
Bob, absolutely beautiful, takes me to a small stream where my mother and I used to set up our painting easels and paint the scenery, much congratulations on your win.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/15/2011 1:57:00 PM
Thank you Greg. Glad I could recall a fond memory.
Date: 12/15/2011 10:13:00 AM
I enjoyed the whole scene you painted,Bob.Congratulations on your big win!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/15/2011 10:54:00 AM
Thank you Fabiyas
Date: 12/15/2011 10:10:00 AM
a real toper, bob.. sweet congrats.:) huggs!
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 12/15/2011 10:10:00 AM
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Date: 12/15/2011 6:40:00 AM
Just wonderful! I loved the use of personification! Congrad's Light & Love
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/15/2011 8:29:00 AM
Thanks very much Debbie
Date: 12/15/2011 5:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Twelve" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/15/2011 8:29:00 AM
Thank you Carol
Date: 12/15/2011 5:08:00 AM
Bob! You are filling up my favorites bin! You must quit doing this to me!!! ha ha. I am intrigued by the personification of nature. Penned in complete elegance. Now yours is a book I am ready to buy! Happy holidays...Gwendolen ps...I have guessed the age of this brook as an elementary school=aged little girl. Am I right? :)
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/15/2011 8:31:00 AM
I guess someone's got to like them:) And you are very perceptive. I had a child in mind when I wrote this.
Date: 12/15/2011 3:53:00 AM
Congratulations Bob, and happy forthcoming holidays x
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Bob Quigley
Date: 12/15/2011 8:31:00 AM
Thank you and to you as well Mandy
Date: 11/18/2011 11:27:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comments Bob. Have a wonderful weekend. Live, Love, and Laugh. Love, Carol
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/18/2011 2:10:00 PM
Appreciate it Carol. Thank you
Date: 11/17/2011 10:52:00 PM
Like a wonderland poem, Bob, this woodland brook. Wonderful metaphors!
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/18/2011 8:55:00 AM
Thanks so much Andrea
Date: 11/15/2011 12:14:00 PM
It runs to perfection Bob, an enchanting verse that I can almost hear.
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Bob Quigley
Date: 11/15/2011 12:59:00 PM
Thank you Elizabeth

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