Woodland Brook

Soft at first, the melody grows louder as I near The carefree brook skips through the wood Singing to herself, laughing at her song Warmed by the sun whose golden fingers Dance upon the surface, and caress the ripples She meanders aimlessly, exploring, embracing I am taken by the silence that surrounds me No sound save the waters lullaby Her symphony floating lightly o'er the glen I bask in the peaceful essence of the moment Nature, christened in her flowered gown Applauds the melodic serenade
11/15,2011
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Arno Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 3:57 PM
Congratulations on your winning entry Jon
Quigley Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 10:15 PM
Thank you Jon
Stanley Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 10:59 AM
Bob, absolutely beautiful, takes me to a small stream where my mother and I used to set up our painting easels and paint the scenery, much congratulations on your win.
Quigley Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Thank you Greg. Glad I could recall a fond memory.
M V Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 10:13 AM
I enjoyed the whole scene you painted,Bob.Congratulations on your big win!
Quigley Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 10:54 AM
Thank you Fabiyas
Onclaud Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 10:10 AM
a real toper, bob.. sweet congrats.:) huggs!
Onclaud Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 10:10 AM
*topper*
Guzzi Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 6:40 AM
Just wonderful! I loved the use of personification! Congrad's Light & Love
Quigley Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Thanks very much Debbie
Brown Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 5:23 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Two To Twelve" contest Bob. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Thank you Carol
Song Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 5:08 AM
Bob! You are filling up my favorites bin! You must quit doing this to me!!! ha ha. I am intrigued by the personification of nature. Penned in complete elegance. Now yours is a book I am ready to buy! Happy holidays...Gwendolen ps...I have guessed the age of this brook as an elementary school=aged little girl. Am I right? :)
Quigley Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 8:31 AM
I guess someone's got to like them:) And you are very perceptive. I had a child in mind when I wrote this.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 3:53 AM
Congratulations Bob, and happy forthcoming holidays x
Quigley Avatar
December 15, 2011 at 8:31 AM
Thank you and to you as well Mandy
Brown Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 11:27 AM
Thank you for your kind comments Bob. Have a wonderful weekend. Live, Love, and Laugh. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 2:10 PM
Appreciate it Carol. Thank you
Dietrich Avatar
November 17, 2011 at 10:52 PM
Like a wonderland poem, Bob, this woodland brook. Wonderful metaphors!
Quigley Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 8:55 AM
Thanks so much Andrea
Wesley Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 12:14 PM
It runs to perfection Bob, an enchanting verse that I can almost hear.
Quigley Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 12:59 PM
Thank you Elizabeth
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