Wooden Whispers

Wooden Whispers

Harsh winds have shaped the hollows of my cheeks
artistic rains ingrained life’s ruddy smile
wise owls tutored students from my peak
young lover’s etched their passing – single file.

Time and sun have added creaking to my joints
I bore high water marks yet stood my ground
a moose once spent the night in snowdrift maze
lone visitor in months of Winter’s white.

I rest under clear sky and budding trees
while strangers pose for “selfies” ‘neath my eaves
long for the hum of saw and hard heeled boots
childhood play before they fled their roots.

I serve a distant melancholy need
of simpler times and every dream a steed.


©8/18/2017

submitted to – Covered Bridge – Poetry contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Wolf Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 6:20 PM
Gee, you wrote this almost seven years ago, John. If you joints were creaking then, what the H are they doing now, my friend?! ~ Russ T. Gates
Christian Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 3:05 AM
Congrats on your featured poem
Smith Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 9:58 PM
I think the entry's in this contest are truly outstanding. To place is a real compliment, congratulations John...
Webster Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 12:08 PM
:O This is so beautiful! It reminds me of The Giving Tree, but for a mature audience. I love it!
Roper Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 11:04 AM
Magnificent write ,John , congratulation on a great win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
Medders Tobechi Avatar
September 2, 2017 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well written.
Wood Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 10:36 PM
John, this is fantastic. I love the personification and the nostalgic feeling. I think you have a winner here! Good luck with the contest. -- Dean
Wood Avatar
September 4, 2017 at 4:38 PM
Back to congratulate you!
Sands Avatar
August 18, 2017 at 2:20 PM
Well done John. Very creative. Good luck in the contest :)
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