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Wooden Whispers

Wooden Whispers Harsh winds have shaped the hollows of my cheeks artistic rains ingrained life’s ruddy smile wise owls tutored students from my peak young lover’s etched their passing – single file. Time and sun have added creaking to my joints I bore high water marks yet stood my ground a moose once spent the night in snowdrift maze lone visitor in months of Winter’s white. I rest under clear sky and budding trees while strangers pose for “selfies” ‘neath my eaves long for the hum of saw and hard heeled boots childhood play before they fled their roots. I serve a distant melancholy need of simpler times and every dream a steed. ©8/18/2017 submitted to – Covered Bridge – Poetry contest

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Date: 9/2/2017 9:58:00 PM
I think the entry's in this contest are truly outstanding. To place is a real compliment, congratulations John...
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Date: 9/2/2017 12:08:00 PM
:O This is so beautiful! It reminds me of The Giving Tree, but for a mature audience. I love it!
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Date: 9/2/2017 11:04:00 AM
Magnificent write ,John , congratulation on a great win.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/2/2017 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Well written.
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Date: 8/18/2017 10:36:00 PM
John, this is fantastic. I love the personification and the nostalgic feeling. I think you have a winner here! Good luck with the contest. -- Dean
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Date: 9/4/2017 4:38:00 PM
Back to congratulate you!
Date: 8/18/2017 2:20:00 PM
Well done John. Very creative. Good luck in the contest :)
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