Wooden Soul

I make this detection
upon introspection
of the woodblock inside me named soul
I'm sightless to beauty
on par with a cootie
or, moreover, an underground mole

I distinguish not burdock
from daisy nor hollyhock
a flower is a flower; just that
in all shades and shapes
their splendor escapes
their fragrance akin to rat

For music I've no ear
from hip-hop to austere
discordant cacophonies at best
hush is harmonic;
uncluttered by sonic
my woodblock is calm and at rest

Plaintive prose
gets right up my nose
and further if wordily verbose;
I don't mean to knock
but it's all poppycock
and frankly it's inclined to perturb us.

I have more to relate
let me share my pet hate
'tis birdsong, a misnomer of speech
birds scream and shriek
they squeal and they squeak
a maddening medley of screech
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Seal Avatar
August 5, 2013 at 3:54 PM
Any more pet hates, I bet the list is longer than this lol. Take care, Richard
Seal Avatar
July 18, 2013 at 2:32 PM
I'm only commenting on this one again to get your smiling face back in the pic parade haha. Take care Richard
Jones Avatar
June 20, 2013 at 4:56 PM
I really love the a flower is just a flower! Great poem and congratulations
Roberts Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 9:17 PM
Well done Delysia ....Seren
Richards Avatar
June 19, 2013 at 6:57 PM
This is so clever and whimsical....love it........the twist of each stanza rolls on my tongue!! It is funny, cute.....and far from annoying to my ear......congratulations, Delysia!!
A   Avatar
June 10, 2013 at 9:34 AM
Delysia, Congratulations with your nice winning poem ... xox~ LINDA
A  Avatar
June 7, 2013 at 10:56 AM
thank you for choosing my contest. Congrats! ~SKAT~
Seal Avatar
May 26, 2013 at 5:39 PM
I look at your poems at intervals, just sipping one at a time to get the max enjoyment as long as i can, (coz u dont list many) lol, I love the jibe in this. You are an ace writer and I don't believe for a minute there's a wooden soul at work here. Take care, Richard
Dietrich Avatar
September 3, 2012 at 10:10 AM
Please put some new poems, sweetie. I can't find any of your poems that I have not already seen, and you are so GOOD with words. I'm still waiting!!
Zzzzz Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 1:58 PM
An inventive and amusing poem. I hope you are only joking?! I'm sure you have a soul of pure gold! Best wishes, Robert.
Johnson Avatar
June 6, 2011 at 10:38 PM
Very cute way of voicing opinion, like someone from the old Empire dominion, Our big flying foxes squalk all night, and plaster the car, crimson /white, and its good paint too. Joe sent me a little verse, nothing bad n nuttin worse, n bombulator was slang for auto here in the 60s... great rhyming babe ... xo Don
Davies Avatar
June 4, 2011 at 1:39 AM
Just been catching up a little and found this. Seems like you have all the attributes that are usually attributed to us rhyming poets!............. I love it when people tell the truth! (:
A  Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 12:43 AM
grats on your awesome contest entry Luv*Skat
Neels Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 12:18 PM
Hey there Delysia, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest.. ;) try and stay warm seems like it's another cold night ahead ;)
Phookan Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 11:56 AM
Very cute and funny piece,,enjoyed your first poem on soup Delysia.. Congrats on your awesome win..thanks for your sweet comments on mine..love, gautami
Taylor Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 7:13 AM
Congrats on your win, delysia. Excellent piece. Great job. xxxRalph
Mehta Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 6:59 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d. delysia
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2011 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win in P.D.'s contest Delysia. Love, Carol
A   Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 11:04 PM
Delysia~ CONGRATULATIONS!! In my contest, and thank you for supporting my contest. I had a great time reading and judging every entry in my contest. Thanks for being among all my chosen winners. have a great one,.. Poet D.
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May 31, 2011 at 11:33 PM
No, all thanks to you, especially since I let you know that was not my very first submission. I'll get round the techno side of things yet. I'll be entering your new contest as well and hope to not bungle it again. lol I'm sure you must have had a good time reading and judging. There were some crackers in that lot. Great one, PD.
K. Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:51 PM
This sure is a very intriguing and unique read, Delysia :) enjoyed this one and super congrats on your win :)
Sweetheart Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 9:25 PM
congrats delysia on a wonderful win in this contest luv.. enjoy sweet success...
Dietrich Avatar
May 31, 2011 at 8:34 PM
A very interesting one, Delysia. I really enjoyed this. Congats on your first post and a winner!
Wayne Avatar
May 26, 2011 at 6:41 AM
This was a pleasure to digest.....good luck with the woodblock :)
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May 25, 2011 at 12:16 PM
Great, thought provoking write Delysia! A truly talented poet my friend! Thank you for your comments on my work... Lay
Zzzzz Avatar
April 28, 2011 at 12:55 AM
Pity the poor woodblock. Good piece of satire!
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