Wondrous Wonderings

Sometimes I wonder whether you are just a brilliant illusion my mind has created If so, my darling I must commend my own creativity For if you are a product of my idle mind I wonder what an active one might accomplish I could call you an angel, but why bother when with your fiery eyes you resemble more a devil’s temptation Perhaps an artist’s muse, you are but then again a fool he must be to let you witness this broken world Do you enjoy this, my dear? watching me with that infuriatingly knowing smile as I run frantic, my eyes tired and crazed and paint splatters stretched across my clothes While I try to capture you in this moment with the evening sun like a young bride shyly caressing your figure Sometimes I wonder whether you were a mistake of creation An existence that wasn’t supposed to exist For surely such pure beauty couldn’t be mine to behold Your passion like a fallen leaf awaits a gentle breeze (of time) till it floats away leaving the nude soil behind tainted by your memory
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Date: 8/6/2024 10:50:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 2/20/2016 11:53:00 PM
dass, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 12/22/2015 7:20:00 PM
HOPE TO SEE YOU POST AGAIN :)
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Date: 2/17/2015 5:53:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem a lot. I will read more of your poems latter.
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Date: 7/23/2014 8:29:00 PM
Hi Priyanshi, this is such an excellent write - I love it - Bravo! Welcome to PoetrySoup!
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Date: 7/22/2014 8:47:00 AM
Enjoyed reading about your idle mind's wonderings..Way to go..Sara..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 7/22/2014 1:24:00 AM
A great poem. I love the title, the wonderings and the layout on the page. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. Alofa from Samoa Jackie
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Priyanshi Dass
Date: 7/22/2014 4:53:00 AM
Thank you so much for your sweet comment. Much appreciated.
Date: 7/21/2014 9:02:00 AM
Hi Priyanshi, i have enjoyed every bit of your poem, what an entry point to poetrysoup family, welcome
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Date: 7/22/2014 4:52:00 AM
Thank you very much. I'm very glad that you liked the poem.
Date: 7/19/2014 5:28:00 PM
Hi Pryanshi,, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Priyanshi Dass
Date: 7/22/2014 4:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for such a sweet and warm welcome. I'm very exited and looking forward to being a part of this beautiful community of poets.
Date: 7/16/2014 7:17:00 AM
stunning - you have painted beautiful picture in my mind :-)
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Date: 7/16/2014 7:20:00 AM
Thank you so much. I'm very glad that you liked it :)
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